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Into The Hexaline Groove Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Nette Onclaud. Date written: 05/08/2025

Road Trip


      road trip to a concert 
      on their old j a l o p y 
      songs blast on radio 
head-bobbing, foot-tapping,
   and finger-snapping fun...
   until front tire blows out!

carfamilyhumorjourneymusicverse

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CayCay Godwin

May 11, 2025 at 1:30 PM

Love this, what a joy to read. I so enjoyed feeling the freedom / concert-anticipation fun your words conveyed that I totally deflated when the tire did! A prized-gem of a poem ... CayCay

Edward Ibeh

May 11, 2025 at 4:49 PM

Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and visit to my poems today, CayCay:-)