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Road To Realization (Part I)

I’m finally growing up; I realize
Real eyes can recognize these real lies
Lies he, in a landscape barren
Bearin’ a false teachin’ he believed in
 
Deceived by these elders, he felt like the bait
Bate the result as they betray the whole class of oh-eight
Ate the lessons; trusted; left awed
Odd how you long to go back, sidestep the façade

Fraud; caused his mind to alter
Altar of this education abandoned; falter

Faltered, for as he appraised
Praised then, all of the knowledge he gained
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(To be continued)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/22/2009 2:18:00 PM
i love this poem...deep thinkin i like that...cant wait for part 2...can you do me a favor and read a few of mine
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