Road Kill

I passed a squirrel
on a two-lane back road
that a car had run over
Some rule was broken...

Its front legs scratched and scraped 
at the pavement but it was stuck
like glue, flat on the asphalt
Its head was bobbing
up and down, side to side
(Surely there was no pain?)

Damn it ALL, you little...
Slammed on the brakes 
skidded to the side of the road
made an illegal 3 point turn

Returning to the scene of the crime,
I crushed the head of God’s creation
turning it into fresh buzzard food
turning it back home to its Creator

This creature did not have it coming
This creature did not deserve it 
This creature was as good or better
than me or any other human being

God's child minded its business
God's child never hurt anyone
God's child of Nature's symphony
might have done the same for me

God's child had no clue
it was crossing a road
or even what a road was
but I did…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/16/2014 5:50:00 AM
Tim congrats on win hugs
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Date: 5/15/2014 10:06:00 AM
Tim, Congratulations, on your sweet awesome poetry soup win. Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/15/2014 8:48:00 AM
Great poetry Tim ! Simple thoughtful n tender ! Every life shud be equally valued !
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Date: 5/15/2014 8:49:00 AM
Congrats on great win !
Date: 5/15/2014 5:59:00 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Tim
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Date: 5/15/2014 2:13:00 AM
Congratulations Time on your win in PD contest. Smile... Verlena :0))s,
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Date: 5/15/2014 12:47:00 AM
TIm, loving this one again... Congratulations, thank you for supporting my any poem contest # 30... Take, and enjoy your day/night... LUV ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/19/2014 3:17:00 AM
fantastic delightful write indeed!! :D!
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Date: 4/9/2014 2:46:00 PM
edgy and graphic, as quite a few of your poems are, it's surprising that this didn't place in the other contest; I'm reading so much good poetry on nette's list...congrats second time around! :)
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Date: 3/16/2014 10:26:00 AM
another wow from me as well. This is GREAT poetry! LOVED that ending. I hope it scores high!! It was quite an interesting take on the subject: to put the poor animal out of his misery. IF we could but do that for our own of the human species when fate begs for it to be done!
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Date: 3/16/2014 2:05:00 AM
Oh No, not on my road... WOW! What a poem... This has a twist, and if I know Nathan, he enjoys a good ending... I already post that one poem i mentioned... xox~ Linda
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