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Riverside Tryst

Romance Is in the air Let's dance Among Cherry blossoms So young Willow Branches shelter Love's glow 4/1/21 For Joseph May's Finding Your Muse 2 contest Picture #3 Syllables checked by PS syllable checker 2,4,2,2,4,2,2,4,2

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Alexis Y.

Date: 4/25/2021 11:59:00 AM

Hi Kim, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 1:36:00 PM

Thank you, Alexis!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/25/2021 9:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. It is spring and the cherry blossoms are out. Yes, let's dance to a wonderful write. Have a blessed day..............

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 1:36:00 PM

Thank you, Paula!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/25/2021 5:35:00 AM

A fabulous poem, Kim--congrats on your win in Joseph's contest.

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 1:35:00 PM

Thank you, Vijay!

Joseph May

Date: 4/24/2021 10:54:00 AM

Spring brings out the romance, Congrats on your win Kim

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 1:35:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph and thank you for my placement in your contest. It was a challenge.

Judy Ball

Date: 4/2/2021 8:38:00 AM

Nicely done Kim. This has a playful bounce to it. God Bless, JB

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/7/2021 1:18:00 PM

Thank you, Judy!

Juliet Ligon

Date: 4/2/2021 8:32:00 AM

Great job on this! I was trying to play around with the form and I found it difficult. Yours is beautiful!

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/7/2021 1:18:00 PM

Thank you, Juliet!

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/2/2021 8:31:00 AM

Wow Have not seen you for awhile Kim, you have not lost your poetic touch. lovely poem.

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/7/2021 1:18:00 PM

I've been gone awhile, but now I'm back. Thank you, Harry!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/2/2021 8:27:00 AM

Dancing among the cherry blossoms, so lovely, hoping for a win for you :)

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/7/2021 1:17:00 PM

Thank you, Michelle!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/1/2021 9:35:00 PM

Sweet, pretty poem, Kim. G.L. in the contest, gw

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/7/2021 1:15:00 PM

Thank you, Gershon!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/1/2021 3:03:00 PM

A pretty romance

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/7/2021 1:15:00 PM

Thank you, Kim!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/1/2021 2:49:00 PM

what a charming interpretation of the image, good luck in the contest Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/7/2021 1:15:00 PM

Thank you, Jan!

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/1/2021 9:32:00 AM

Hi Kim, You penned a good entry for the contest. It works well with your chosen photo. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/7/2021 1:14:00 PM

Thank you, Alexis!