Riverside Tryst

Romance
    Is in the air 
         Let's dance

Among 
     Cherry blossoms
          So young

Willow
     Branches shelter
           Love's glow

4/1/21
For Joseph May's Finding Your Muse 2 contest
Picture #3
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Y. Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 11:59 AM
Hi Kim, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Merryman Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 1:36 PM
Thank you, Alexis!
Goldsmith Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 9:50 AM
Congratulations on your win. It is spring and the cherry blossoms are out. Yes, let's dance to a wonderful write. Have a blessed day..............
Merryman Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 1:36 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Pandit Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 5:35 AM
A fabulous poem, Kim--congrats on your win in Joseph's contest.
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April 25, 2021 at 1:35 PM
Thank you, Vijay!
May Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 10:54 AM
Spring brings out the romance, Congrats on your win Kim
Merryman Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 1:35 PM
Thank you, Joseph and thank you for my placement in your contest. It was a challenge.
Ball Avatar
April 2, 2021 at 8:38 AM
Nicely done Kim. This has a playful bounce to it. God Bless, JB
Merryman Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 1:18 PM
Thank you, Judy!
Ligon Avatar
April 2, 2021 at 8:32 AM
Great job on this! I was trying to play around with the form and I found it difficult. Yours is beautiful!
Merryman Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 1:18 PM
Thank you, Juliet!
Horsman Avatar
April 2, 2021 at 8:31 AM
Wow Have not seen you for awhile Kim, you have not lost your poetic touch. lovely poem.
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April 7, 2021 at 1:18 PM
I've been gone awhile, but now I'm back. Thank you, Harry!
Faulkner Avatar
April 2, 2021 at 8:27 AM
Dancing among the cherry blossoms, so lovely, hoping for a win for you :)
Merryman Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 1:17 PM
Thank you, Michelle!
Wolf Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 9:35 PM
Sweet, pretty poem, Kim. G.L. in the contest, gw
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April 7, 2021 at 1:15 PM
Thank you, Gershon!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 3:03 PM
A pretty romance
Merryman Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 1:15 PM
Thank you, Kim!
Allison Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 2:49 PM
what a charming interpretation of the image, good luck in the contest Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
Merryman Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 1:15 PM
Thank you, Jan!
Y. Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 9:32 AM
Hi Kim, You penned a good entry for the contest. It works well with your chosen photo. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Merryman Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 1:14 PM
Thank you, Alexis!
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