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Riverscapes

Between thick lush banks,
Composed verses flow from earth:
Liquid poetry.

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James Fraser

October 6, 2009 at 11:41 AM

Beautiful Haiki Raul, wonderful imagery flowing here >> James

Robin L. Gass

October 6, 2009 at 10:33 AM

This is another perfect example of your poetic talenrt, Raul. Thank you for sharing the beauty you create! Love, Robin

Cesar Cantu

October 5, 2009 at 7:31 PM

Indeed, pure poetry; so pure it has to turn into tangible matter; oh dear @@ thanks for clarifying that C= and for the experience =D wiii

Abe Lopez

October 5, 2009 at 7:19 PM

the music of the river sings a song with many night and day verses. nicely done!

Trudy Diane Rider

October 5, 2009 at 5:39 AM

Wonderfully descriptive! I can sit and listen to a babbling brook or river for hours. Great poem Raul. Thank you for comments on my recent Haikus also. ~Trudy~

Sean Kelly

October 5, 2009 at 2:51 AM

Excellent Haiku , Raul . Flow onnnnnn ....

Sara Kendrick

October 4, 2009 at 11:43 PM

Interesting way to view a river. With all that flow we should never run out of water to consume. Keep writing. Sara

Charmaine Chircop

October 4, 2009 at 9:35 PM

I can picture the scene Raul,verses flowing in rivers escaping on riverscapes till they reach the hearts..in liquid poetry-beauiful Haiku..excellentwork--Charma