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Riverscapes

Between thick lush banks, Composed verses flow from earth: Liquid poetry.

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James Fraser

Date: 10/6/2009 11:41:00 AM

Beautiful Haiki Raul, wonderful imagery flowing here >> James

Robin L. Gass

Date: 10/6/2009 10:33:00 AM

This is another perfect example of your poetic talenrt, Raul. Thank you for sharing the beauty you create! Love, Robin

Cesar Cantu

Date: 10/5/2009 7:31:00 PM

Indeed, pure poetry; so pure it has to turn into tangible matter; oh dear @@ thanks for clarifying that C= and for the experience =D wiii

Abe Lopez

Date: 10/5/2009 7:19:00 PM

the music of the river sings a song with many night and day verses. nicely done!

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 10/5/2009 5:39:00 AM

Wonderfully descriptive! I can sit and listen to a babbling brook or river for hours. Great poem Raul. Thank you for comments on my recent Haikus also. ~Trudy~

Sean Kelly

Date: 10/5/2009 2:51:00 AM

Excellent Haiku , Raul . Flow onnnnnn ....

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/4/2009 11:43:00 PM

Interesting way to view a river. With all that flow we should never run out of water to consume. Keep writing. Sara

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/4/2009 9:35:00 PM

I can picture the scene Raul,verses flowing in rivers escaping on riverscapes till they reach the hearts..in liquid poetry-beauiful Haiku..excellentwork--Charma

Krystal Cochrane

Date: 10/4/2009 9:19:00 PM

Beautiful imagery to pair nature with poetry- this is a wonderful write. ~KC~

Michael Jordan

Date: 10/4/2009 8:58:00 PM

I loved this haiku Raul - excellent poetry my friend - liqued poetry indeed, god Bless, mj