Rivers of the Mind


I will sing to thee of love,
from the mountain top of time
Let the rivers of love
in my mind
                flow
                     down
                            to the valley of your heart
I who love you with an ancient desire,
willingly cast myself into the waterfall
Downward falling,
submerging in waters of pure peace
The salvation of love is calling
out to you
Let me flow into the deltas of your heart
Be not afraid of the rivers of love
pouring from my mind,
rushing down into the very soul of you
Let us together
take a vaporous journey back up
to the mountain top of time
Let us repeat the unending cycle
of the joined rivers of love of our mind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 3/3/2017 7:22:00 PM
My friend, you do Romanticism extremely well. THIS ONE IS A TRUE GEM.. A7
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Date: 2/25/2017 6:50:00 PM
A true romantic soul shines from your passionate mind Freddie. Just Beautiful! ; ) 7
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Date: 2/25/2017 8:37:00 AM
What a tremendous romantic piece Freddie.
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Date: 2/24/2017 4:12:00 PM
You love truly and deeply, as such poetry cannot spring from a shallow pool. Inspiring words Freddie xomo
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Date: 2/24/2017 3:28:00 PM
Wonderful imagery of love, Freddie! Very beautiful poetry here :)
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Date: 2/24/2017 1:48:00 PM
Such an outpouring of love Freddie...most excellent
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Date: 2/24/2017 12:51:00 PM
I took that plunge a time or two, wound up on a deserted beach:) Lovely poem, Freddie. I'd like to meet this lady friend:)
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Date: 2/24/2017 12:35:00 PM
Really nice, beautiful love poem Freddie. I really enjoyed the thought of the joined rivers, that was such a cool touch my friend. Bravo.
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