Riverboat Gambler

He plied the Mississippi River on the paddle wheeler 'Dandy Dame'.
Gamblin' was his profession and three-card monte was his game.
He became very creative at palmin' that elusive ace of spades.
Such dexterity and sleight of hand he had practiced for decades!

He embarked in Saint Louis for a cruise to the town of New Orleans.
On his arm hung one of his gaudily dressed bordello 'queens'!
He wore diamond rings on each finger and impeccably tailored suits,
A homburg hat, pearl studs, gold-tipped cane and alligator boots!

He toted a concealed derringer just in the event there was trouble,
And he took a table near the door so he could lam on the double!
He ordered Jack Daniels bourbon for the dudes he was soon to con,
And sized up the naive and hapless victims who dared to take him on!

The gambler let others win a hand or so to make them feel at ease.
His shill closely watched as the gambler, his moment was to seize!
His winnin's piled up as bettors tried to locate the shiftin' ace.
Losers dropped out of the game and other suckers took their place!

One astute monte player saw the scam and called the gambler's hand.
He drew his forty-fours, chairs toppled and folks fled to beat the band!
The gambler drew his rod but he met his God, blood oozin' on the floor!
His sobbin' 'queen' clasped him to her breast to know his love no more!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Placed No. 2 in Paula Swanson's "Pick A Card, Any Card" Contest - Jun 2011
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Brown Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 10:45 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula's "Pick A Card"contest Bob. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 6:51 AM
Congrats Robert on your 2nd place win in Paula's contest.
Dietrich Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 9:15 PM
congratulations, I knew it was a winner,Robert!
Fraser Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 3:58 PM
Robert, your stories in poetry form are simply outstanding. It's like reading a mini movie. Mega congrats on your fine win in Paula's contest :)
Guzzi Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 1:44 PM
ooh I loved this type of tale, reminded me of Maverick with James Gardner! Congrad's Light & Love
Horne Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 10:04 AM
Awesome. Many congrats on all your wins, Robert : )
Devonshire Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 9:17 AM
I'm smiling seeing your poem placing so high, Bob. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
Richards Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 8:28 AM
You are the greatest story teller, Robert! I am honored to share this spot with you!! Congratulations on another wonderful poem! ...Carrie
Sweetheart Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 8:11 AM
Congrats Bob on your exciting win in Paula's contest with this unique write my friend. enjoy with luv..
Mister Roboto Avatar
May 30, 2011 at 10:12 AM
very vivid story! i grew up on the river boats on the old O-hi-ho Ohio River in Cincy & 7rate
Foulk Avatar
May 29, 2011 at 10:03 AM
thank you for commenting on The Good Samaritan Comes Home
Dailey Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 9:34 AM
Very creative. I once learned how to stack a deck and deal off the bottom but got scared that someone might uncover me so I only used it on friends in friendly (no money) games. Mike
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May 26, 2011 at 9:55 AM
I love your creativeness Bob H., but knowing you,.. you probably know a few of these puck stories... I think i will pass the scam... and deal the cards.... love your entry,..p.d.
Sweetheart Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 7:48 AM
wishing u a happy holiday weekend Bob and to your family as well my friend.. be safe and have fun.. thankxx for your sweet comments always luv..
A  Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 6:50 AM
I love it Bob, one is always a fool when it comes to gambling or being the gambler. Amazing entry. The best of luxxx~luv*SKAT
Taylor Avatar
May 25, 2011 at 8:24 PM
Another great contest entry, my friend. Outstanding write. Sounds like a good movie plot. Good luck. Thanks for your comments on my recent postings. Best to you guys. Una sends her best. Enjoy you days ahead. Ralphie
Foulk Avatar
May 25, 2011 at 5:12 PM
very creative piece, really enjoyed reading this, brought a smile as always.
Peranteau Avatar
May 25, 2011 at 3:32 PM
am just lov'n these entries dear poet ! Just great ! TY for giving it that great punch of poesy Robert ! Have a great week sir....much love, james
Devonshire Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 8:47 PM
Bob, Paula posted a new blog and no changes are needed now. I know this will be a winner! Love, Carolyn
Francis Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 8:13 PM
Women will do that to you! Nice Write Bob I can almost hear the paddle wheels.
Dietrich Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 7:47 PM
GReat story of a sorry gambling man, Robert. You are a master at rhyming fun stories!!
Burton Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 6:09 PM
Enjoyed this read tonight. Have a great one.
Devonshire Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 4:03 PM
Bob, important Soup mail! Love, CD
Mehta Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 3:56 PM
nice tale of the gamblers on the baot, very captivating way to tell, Bob
Devonshire Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 11:37 AM
Bob, The fishing trip begins Monday, May 30 and we return to Key West Wednesday, June 1. Early Saturday morning I'll be setting out and you're right! I can't wait! Love, Carolyn
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