Riverboat Gambler

He plied the Mississippi River on the paddle wheeler 'Dandy Dame'.
Gamblin' was his profession and three-card monte was his game.
He became very creative at palmin' that elusive ace of spades.
Such dexterity and sleight of hand he had practiced for decades!

He embarked in Saint Louis for a cruise to the town of New Orleans.
On his arm hung one of his gaudily dressed bordello 'queens'!
He wore diamond rings on each finger and impeccably tailored suits,
A homburg hat, pearl studs, gold-tipped cane and alligator boots!

He toted a concealed derringer just in the event there was trouble,
And he took a table near the door so he could lam on the double!
He ordered Jack Daniels bourbon for the dudes he was soon to con,
And sized up the naive and hapless victims who dared to take him on!

The gambler let others win a hand or so to make them feel at ease.
His shill closely watched as the gambler, his moment was to seize!
His winnin's piled up as bettors tried to locate the shiftin' ace.
Losers dropped out of the game and other suckers took their place!

One astute monte player saw the scam and called the gambler's hand.
He drew his forty-fours, chairs toppled and folks fled to beat the band!
The gambler drew his rod but he met his God, blood oozin' on the floor!
His sobbin' 'queen' clasped him to her breast to know his love no more!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
© All Rights Reserved

Placed No. 2 in Paula Swanson's "Pick A Card, Any Card" Contest - Jun 2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/8/2011 10:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula's "Pick A Card"contest Bob. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/7/2011 6:51:00 AM
Congrats Robert on your 2nd place win in Paula's contest.
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Date: 6/6/2011 9:15:00 PM
congratulations, I knew it was a winner,Robert!
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Date: 6/6/2011 3:58:00 PM
Robert, your stories in poetry form are simply outstanding. It's like reading a mini movie. Mega congrats on your fine win in Paula's contest :)
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Date: 6/6/2011 1:44:00 PM
ooh I loved this type of tale, reminded me of Maverick with James Gardner! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 6/6/2011 10:04:00 AM
Awesome. Many congrats on all your wins, Robert : )
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Date: 6/6/2011 9:17:00 AM
I'm smiling seeing your poem placing so high, Bob. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/6/2011 8:28:00 AM
You are the greatest story teller, Robert! I am honored to share this spot with you!! Congratulations on another wonderful poem! ...Carrie
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Date: 6/6/2011 8:11:00 AM
Congrats Bob on your exciting win in Paula's contest with this unique write my friend. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 5/30/2011 10:12:00 AM
very vivid story! i grew up on the river boats on the old O-hi-ho Ohio River in Cincy & 7rate
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Date: 5/29/2011 10:03:00 AM
thank you for commenting on The Good Samaritan Comes Home
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Date: 5/27/2011 9:34:00 AM
Very creative. I once learned how to stack a deck and deal off the bottom but got scared that someone might uncover me so I only used it on friends in friendly (no money) games. Mike
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Date: 5/26/2011 9:55:00 AM
I love your creativeness Bob H., but knowing you,.. you probably know a few of these puck stories... I think i will pass the scam... and deal the cards.... love your entry,..p.d.
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Date: 5/26/2011 7:48:00 AM
wishing u a happy holiday weekend Bob and to your family as well my friend.. be safe and have fun.. thankxx for your sweet comments always luv..
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Date: 5/26/2011 6:50:00 AM
I love it Bob, one is always a fool when it comes to gambling or being the gambler. Amazing entry. The best of luxxx~luv*SKAT
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Date: 5/25/2011 8:24:00 PM
Another great contest entry, my friend. Outstanding write. Sounds like a good movie plot. Good luck. Thanks for your comments on my recent postings. Best to you guys. Una sends her best. Enjoy you days ahead. Ralphie
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Date: 5/25/2011 5:12:00 PM
very creative piece, really enjoyed reading this, brought a smile as always.
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Date: 5/25/2011 3:32:00 PM
am just lov'n these entries dear poet ! Just great ! TY for giving it that great punch of poesy Robert ! Have a great week sir....much love, james
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Date: 5/24/2011 8:47:00 PM
Bob, Paula posted a new blog and no changes are needed now. I know this will be a winner! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/24/2011 8:13:00 PM
Women will do that to you! Nice Write Bob I can almost hear the paddle wheels.
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Date: 5/24/2011 7:47:00 PM
GReat story of a sorry gambling man, Robert. You are a master at rhyming fun stories!!
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Date: 5/24/2011 6:09:00 PM
Enjoyed this read tonight. Have a great one.
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Date: 5/24/2011 4:03:00 PM
Bob, important Soup mail! Love, CD
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Date: 5/24/2011 3:56:00 PM
nice tale of the gamblers on the baot, very captivating way to tell, Bob
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Date: 5/24/2011 11:37:00 AM
Bob, The fishing trip begins Monday, May 30 and we return to Key West Wednesday, June 1. Early Saturday morning I'll be setting out and you're right! I can't wait! Love, Carolyn
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