River Walk

Stifling hot Sunday
Body is achingly weak
Need some wet relief

8-27-14 for Haiku Contest
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March 21, 2015 at 5:13 PM
CHRISTINE:) Thank you so much for the reply. That was nice of you to comment my comment. ((Regarding the reply you left in my comment box)) Always ~LINDA~
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September 7, 2014 at 1:21 PM
A refreshing dip, or a cool 'Chardonnay' sip, nice one Christine, James :)
Andresen Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 5:08 AM
- Christine, congratulations on winning poem in the contest: "River Walk" - Well done, I like it :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 10:48 PM
So to the river you shall go!! I think it sounds very refreshing. congrats for your win.
Costello Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 10:29 AM
Andrea----Thanks for your congrats---:-)Christine
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 10:19 AM
I love cooling in water. Congratulations Christine.
Gibson Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 9:26 AM
Ahhh...you know where to get it. Congrats.
Allison Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 6:59 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Christine:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Costello Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 8:56 AM
Jan- thanks for the congrats-feels good. :-))) Christine
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September 5, 2014 at 11:21 PM
Christine:. Congratulations, on an awesome River Walk, Win:):):) Enjoy the smiles, and my blog, You're a "River Legend" if you'd like or have time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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September 6, 2014 at 8:56 AM
Thank you Linda and I'll be sure to check the blog. Yeah!!!! :-) Christine
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August 28, 2014 at 12:04 PM
I hope that the river cooled you to a more comfortable temp..Way to go with this one for the contest..Thanks for the visit..Sara
Costello Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 2:02 PM
Thank you Sara. :-) Christine
Mehta Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 5:53 AM
Nice take on the theme of river walk, Christine
Costello Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 9:59 AM
Thank you for reading my poem. :-) Christine
Bordner Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 2:01 AM
Yes Christine, a good gush is always welcome...J.A.B.
Allison Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 4:14 PM
Great write - would prefer a nice relaxing bath rather than a dip in the river LOl good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
Costello Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 10:01 AM
But the river is so much more fun! Especially with friends. Thanks for the luck. :-) Christine
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August 27, 2014 at 2:55 PM
There are days that I feel exactly this way...enjoyed! BG
Costello Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 10:03 AM
hmnn! -today is a hot one-must visualize the river today. :-))))Christine
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August 27, 2014 at 1:58 PM
- A cool bath in the river - I like this very much - well done, Christine - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Costello Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 10:04 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise for your luck and for commenting on the poem. :-) Christine
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