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River Turmoil

sunshine went away a growing threat to safety~ at sea, a storm strikes a world soaked in dew and within every dewdrop ~ planet in turmoil wet, black bough petals rain taste along the river ~ frog leaps into lake
Written: September 18, 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Baker Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 3:48 PM
Loved the imagery and the connectiveness of the verses, Lasaad. Have a great weekend my friend. Bill
Buehler Avatar
September 20, 2022 at 11:49 AM
The images within these marvelous haiku reveal tumultuous beauty. I love the taste of rain along the river, and the planet in turmoil within every dewdrop. :)
Kendrick Avatar
September 20, 2022 at 8:38 AM
It is always an interesting view of the world through the mirror of a dewdrop or raindrop. I enjoyed reading your work today. Lovely snapshot. Your visit to my page added a new flavor. Sara
Trifiatis Avatar
September 19, 2022 at 12:59 PM
What marvelous imagery, my dearest Lasaad! Exceedingly beautiful! Be blessed!
Andresen Avatar
September 19, 2022 at 8:00 AM
- Excellent written, Las - Is it for contest ? ... I wish you the best of luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
George Avatar
September 19, 2022 at 7:54 AM
Broken fragments of desolation, distress and dissension. Great Haikus !
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