River Turmoil

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sunshine went away a growing threat to safety~ at sea, a storm strikes a world soaked in dew and within every dewdrop ~ planet in turmoil wet, black bough petals rain taste along the river ~ frog leaps into lake Written: September 18, 2022

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Bill Baker

Date: 9/23/2022 3:48:00 PM

Loved the imagery and the connectiveness of the verses, Lasaad. Have a great weekend my friend. Bill

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 9/20/2022 11:49:00 AM

The images within these marvelous haiku reveal tumultuous beauty. I love the taste of rain along the river, and the planet in turmoil within every dewdrop. :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/20/2022 8:38:00 AM

It is always an interesting view of the world through the mirror of a dewdrop or raindrop. I enjoyed reading your work today. Lovely snapshot. Your visit to my page added a new flavor. Sara

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/19/2022 12:59:00 PM

What marvelous imagery, my dearest Lasaad! Exceedingly beautiful! Be blessed!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/19/2022 8:00:00 AM

- Excellent written, Las - Is it for contest ? ... I wish you the best of luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Valsa George

Date: 9/19/2022 7:54:00 AM

Broken fragments of desolation, distress and dissension. Great Haikus !