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Joseph May's One In Five Contest ...28 Jun 25 Visual # 1
Visual# 1 Where river bends on waves which sweep The air rustling mild, I can see Swans waltzing as dusk gloams to peep Where river bends Dressed in lace, how svelte they can be While night shadows begin to creep, Birds of grace prancing near each tree. Bathed by mist, don't they fall asleep? With zig-zag dance, on eve's marquee, Plumes winging till morn...so to leap Where river bends

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Date: 7/7/2025 5:34:00 PM
Great seeing this gem on the list. Big congrats, Nette
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Date: 7/7/2025 6:36:00 AM
Nette, CONGRATS on your win with this lovely poem! Janice
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Date: 7/6/2025 6:43:00 PM
Very nicely done Nette, Congrats on your win
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Date: 7/2/2025 2:29:00 PM
Your "River Of Swans" is a wonderful write. "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away..........
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Date: 6/30/2025 4:55:00 PM
Fanciful write.
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Date: 6/30/2025 11:48:00 AM
Love how you did yours. So graceful , Nette. I sit almost 2 hours now in a pain management clinic. And truly I don't even think they. An help me. Good grief. Anyway I caught up to poetry comments at least
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Date: 6/30/2025 12:01:00 AM
Very beautiful, do you have IG?
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Date: 6/28/2025 10:50:00 AM
Just beautiful, Nette. <3
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Date: 6/28/2025 9:23:00 AM
Beautifully painted picture in words
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Date: 6/28/2025 3:07:00 AM
Your roundel is magical, my dear poet friend. sis! An enchanting nature's ballet that lasts forever. Your pen captivates me always. I immensely enjoyed this precious gem while waiting for the rain here to stop. Thanks a lot again. Best winning wishes although I know this will do well in the podium. Much blessings for sharing your talent with us. Hugs..hugs
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