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River of Fire

Explosion of smoke, Gloomy clouds eclipse the sun: Conflagration waves.

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James Fraser

Date: 9/17/2009 11:45:00 AM

Excellent Haike Raul about a large destructive fire, nice one>>James

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/17/2009 7:32:00 AM

You paint another picture with artistic eyes! A gift you have, Raul!! ~ Carrie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/17/2009 5:49:00 AM

We see it all within your words Raul. Breathtaking. Love, Carol

James Peranteau

Date: 9/17/2009 2:48:00 AM

This Haiku is vivid Raul,...instantly I pictured this as if I caught a still life of it,...great write Raul ! james

Erin Werner

Date: 9/17/2009 1:40:00 AM

this is really good! I like to write what I feel like that one poem..I had a very bad week. hope yours is better than mine:) Erin

Brian Strand

Date: 9/16/2009 11:58:00 PM

Great title for a Frankie Laine song.raul.Rgds Brian

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/16/2009 9:27:00 PM

you are a master of Haiku,River of Fire..fire always capture my soul,heart and emotions well,thanks for all your kind comments and never let your pen dry my friend. cos you"ve got talent.bye Raul--Charma

Abe Lopez

Date: 9/16/2009 9:07:00 PM

another great write on this series on volcanoes... keep them coming RM>>>>

Donna Golden

Date: 9/16/2009 8:15:00 PM

Chilling metaphor, Raul! As always, you've artfully depicted events in striking, clear language. Blessings, Donna

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/16/2009 8:13:00 PM

I imagine that looking down from an aircraft and seeing a wildfire out of control might indeed look like a "River of Fire." Very nice haiku, Raul. And your soup mail has been returned. Love, Carolyn