River of Blessings

On a cold November day I sat beside you
to let you fill me with your crystal charm.
To my surprise I saw a lonely traveler
instinctively I knew he meant no harm.

Approaching me with care he closed the distance
although he seemed a million miles away.
He asked so sweetly just to sit a while
with gladdened heart I bid him please to stay.

He spoke his words of praise to me about you
recounting all the beauty that you hold
and I was blessed with joy that has no boundaries
because he chanced upon your banks of gold.




*To the Brownings, such a loving pair.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 1/2/2009 3:28:00 PM
This is beautiful, Robin, fantastic imagery. Warmest wishes, Donna G.
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Date: 12/24/2008 1:22:00 AM
Beautiful work Robin,glad you are showering us with your talent here on PS.Rgds Brian & Christmas Blessings to you & yours
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Date: 12/21/2008 3:12:00 PM
Robin this is a heartfelt and beautiful poem - Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/21/2008 1:05:00 PM
great poem heartfelt and lovely, thanx for the comments again....Maryam
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Date: 12/21/2008 11:09:00 AM
Wonderful dedication dear lady~It made me think of what The Apostle Paul once said, "Be careful to entertain strangers, for in doing so, you may have entertained an Angel unawares"~"Good Morning Beautiful & Precious & Gifted Robin!"~I hope that "Your" holiday day is going wonderfully for "You" dear lady~that it is being showered with blessings upon every precious step which "You" take!~Well, I believe I'll go read "Your" latest post~"Love Always To 'You,' John!":)
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Date: 12/20/2008 11:33:00 PM
I'm concerned... we can chat on email if you'd like. K.
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Date: 12/20/2008 10:29:00 PM
keithbickerstaffe@yahoo.com - feel free to use it. K.
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Date: 12/20/2008 8:52:00 PM
The only way to resolve it is to confront the person directly... perhaps you have reservations doing that, but once your friend knows your feelings, and that you're being candid and honest, there should be room for reconciliation... Love, Keith
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Date: 12/20/2008 8:20:00 PM
Touching... such lovely sentiment and phrasing. Devotion becomes you... you should write more. God bless, Keith
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Date: 12/20/2008 4:35:00 PM
What a beautiful poem dedicated to a talented duo. Great title! Nice use of rhyme with good flow in this piece. I am glad to hear you have found The Soup an uplifting place. I feel the same way. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. I hope you have a wonderful Christmas. Karen
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Date: 12/20/2008 3:48:00 PM
Such a lovely dedication. They indeed sound like loving, wonderful people to know. Hope they read this. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/20/2008 1:30:00 PM
Great write, Robin. This is the kind of poem I enjoy reading again and again. Love, Nigel
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Date: 12/20/2008 6:41:00 AM
great poem, keep up the good work i love it.
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Date: 12/20/2008 6:29:00 AM
I love the title and the poem rocks! This reads so well and I found myself getting lost in the words. Sweetly written.
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