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River Life and Beauty

River Life and Beauty

Brown skin girls 
with their babbling babies,
romance the river god
scattering petals of red hibiscus.

Naked honeyed bodies
shamelessly glow golden, 
as ripples slowly trickle down
lithe sun-kissed legs.

Cool silver droplets brazenly
caress taut, dark nipples.


03-02-2017

Contest:      River Line
Sponsor:      Rick Parise
Placement:  1st

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Anil Deo Date: 5/20/2018 1:58:00 PM Well, I would virtually swear I saw them in Mauritius, and again in Fiji. Yep ... Brown Girls know how to hae fun. Inspiring write, with echoes of Tolkien and Middle Earth. Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 5/21/2018 2:12:00 PM Hello Anil, what lovely comments and high compliments! Thank you, my friend! Hugs. Pandita

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 2/19/2018 8:10:00 PM Hello Pandita, this poem is beautifully written. I can see the scenes as iIread this poem. have a nice evening my friend. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 2/20/2018 8:21:00 PM Love and hugs to you aswell. Pandita Sietesantos Date: 2/19/2018 8:37:00 PM Hi Darlene, thank you for passing by and for your sweet compliments which I truly appreciate! Love and hugs. Pandita

James Edward Lee Sr. Date: 10/31/2017 6:19:00 PM Very well written a beautiful descriptive pose of the female body along with wonderful homage to the also beautiful lands. Great write and win. Thanks for sharing Pandita James Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 11/13/2017 12:42:00 PM Thank you my friend. I always appreciate your visits and continued support! Have a lovely day! Pandita

Harshita Chaudhary Date: 10/19/2017 1:37:00 AM Very beautiful poem. River's filled with beauty. Thanks for sharing. Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 10/19/2017 11:12:00 AM Hi Harshita, I am so happy you stopped by and glad that you enjoyed reading this piece. Thank you for your wonderful supportive compliments! Best regards. Pandita

Susan Ashley Date: 9/1/2017 10:38:00 PM Absolutely beautiful in content and imagery. Very visual, captivating and sensual! Congrats on your well-deserved win on this exquisite poem Pandita! :) Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 9/3/2017 6:09:00 PM My dear Susan, thank you for stopping by and leaving your superlative complimentary words. Warmest regards. Pandita

Ronald A. Williams Date: 8/6/2017 10:14:00 AM Nice description of a lovely brown lady. Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 8/6/2017 7:36:00 PM Hi Ron, thank you so much for swinging by and leaving your sweet compliments! I really appreciate hearing from you! Best wishes. Pandita

Kika Ayala Date: 6/10/2017 2:15:00 PM Lovely poem brings back memories of my youth when we used to wash our laundry and bath in the river! Beautiful, sensual imagery! You just know how to pen it! Hugs and love! Kika Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 6/12/2017 12:12:00 PM Hi Kika, it's always good to hear from you! Thank you kindly for your lovely compliments! Hugs. Pandita

Eve Roper Date: 5/25/2017 2:56:00 PM Wow,,, awesome... Pandita, have missed you writing.. well deserved win Hugs ~* Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 5/25/2017 3:21:00 PM Thank you, thank you, my sweet friend! Always love to hear from you! Hugs. Pandita

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 4/4/2017 3:40:00 AM Excellent and well penned. No doubt, this one deserves a top placement. Congrats. Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 4/4/2017 11:28:00 AM Many thanks, dear Ravi! I appreciate your kind support! All the best to you. Pandita

Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/4/2017 12:12:00 AM Well done on you first placement! Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 4/4/2017 11:27:00 AM Awww! Thank you so much, Richard! I'm always happy to hear from you! Glad you enjoyed this piece! Hugs. Pandita

Teddy Kimathi Date: 3/29/2017 8:41:00 AM Congrats Pandita, for your well-deserved first placement, with this wonderful piece!! ;-) Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 3/30/2017 9:42:00 AM Hi Teddy, it's always good to hear from you! Thank you kindly for your lovely compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita

Robert Lindley Date: 3/26/2017 6:01:00 AM Truly exceptional sensual poem my friend. As the fortunate husband of a brown skin lady, I know of that which you describe.. My wife Riza is a Philippine beauty with a heart of gold.. Congrats on your win! Login to Reply Robert Lindley Date: 6/13/2017 6:18:00 PM Just dropped by to read yet again this wondrous and sensual poem. A true gem of creativity, vision and immense talent! God bless you and yours my friend... Pandita Sietesantos Date: 3/28/2017 2:09:00 PM My Dear friend, Robert, it is always lovely to hear from you and receive your wonderful complimentary words! Glad you enjoyed this piece! Hope you and Riza are having a beautiful day! Hugs. Pandita

John Michaels Date: 3/20/2017 4:29:00 PM Just thought I'd drop by again to congratulate you on your First Place win!! Gets even better on repeated readings! Well done! Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 3/23/2017 10:19:00 AM My Dear friend, John, thank you for swinging back. It is always lovely to hear from you and receive your wonderful complimentary words! Hope you are having a beautiful day! Hugs. Pandita

Lukas Ficklin Date: 3/20/2017 11:11:00 AM This one deserves a top placement! Sharp imagery interwoven with alliteration and perfect word choice all in this short form.... great writing Pandita! Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 3/20/2017 1:13:00 PM Hello Lukas, thank you for stopping by and leaving your superlative complimentary words. Warmest regards. Pandita

Doug Vinson Date: 3/19/2017 1:45:00 PM Excellent, Pandita - you paint quite a picture there. : ) Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 3/19/2017 2:54:00 PM Awww! Thank you so much, Doug! I'm always happy to hear from you! Glad you enjoyed this piece! Hugs. Pandita

Charlie Smith Date: 3/19/2017 7:57:00 AM Back to congratulate you Pandita, well deserved... Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 3/19/2017 2:52:00 PM Many thanks again, dear Charlie! I appreciate your kind support! All the best to you. Pandita

Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 3/19/2017 5:21:00 AM excellent! this has everything: striking, sensual imagery, alliteration, internal rhyme...congrats on a well deserved 1st! Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 3/19/2017 2:49:00 PM Hi Charlotte, I am so happy you stopped by and that you enjoyed reading this piece. Thank you for your wonderful supportive compliments! Best regards. Pandita

Joseph May Date: 3/18/2017 9:03:00 PM Congrats on your first place win Pandita Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 3/19/2017 2:48:00 PM Joseph, thank you for your kind words!! Hugs. Pandita

James Inman Date: 3/18/2017 5:12:00 PM A beautiful write and beautiful imagery Pandita. Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 3/19/2017 2:45:00 PM Thank you, James, I am so happy that you like this piece! Best wishes. Pandita

Phillip Garcia Date: 3/18/2017 4:21:00 PM Ooh my. Congratulations on a wonderful poem and for making me blush. Great job Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 3/19/2017 2:47:00 PM Hi Phillip, I am so happy you stopped by and that you enjoyed reading this piece. Thank you for your comment and lovely compliments! Pandita

Rita Solis Radius Date: 3/17/2017 9:00:00 AM Hi, Pandita! Well written...i love this!! Thank you for sharing it on PoetrySoup!!! Rita. ^^ Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 3/17/2017 9:27:00 PM Hi Rita, thank you so much for visiting and leaving such a lovely compliment! Hope you are enjoying a beautiful weekend! Pandita

Paul Callus Date: 3/14/2017 12:40:00 PM What a beautiful sensual picture you paint with just six strokes of your poetic brush, Pandita! I imagine this to be taking place in a far eastern country. Always a pleasure to read your work. #7 Warm regards // paul Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 3/15/2017 10:10:00 AM Paul, my Dear friend, it is always lovely to hear from you and receive your wonderful complimentary words and high score! I'm so delighted that you enjoyed this piece! Hope you are having a beautiful day! Hugs. Pandita

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 3/12/2017 5:22:00 AM Excellent. Sounds like a sensuous poem. A lovely scene too. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 3/12/2017 7:55:00 PM Hi Ravi, it's always good to hear from you! Thank you kindly for your lovely compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita

Elizabeth Kinch Date: 3/7/2017 12:47:00 AM The imagery in this write is incredible, wow to you and a definite 7 also going in my favourites so I can reread again and again. Thank you Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 3/8/2017 1:20:00 PM Hello Elizabeth, thanks for stopping by and leaving your superlative complimentary words and high score. Warmest regards. Pandita

Vladislav Raven Date: 3/5/2017 6:08:00 PM Hi Pandita, another excellent piece from your pen. I love the picture displayed in this sensual write. I find a peace within the words. Your heart sings its song once more. Such gentle beauty. This has to be a seven. Hugs....Mike. XX Login to Reply Pandita Sietesantos Date: 3/6/2017 9:04:00 AM My Dear friend, Mike, it is always lovely to hear from you and receive your wonderful complimentary words! Glad you enjoyed this piece! Hope you are having a beautiful day! Hugs. Pandita

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