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River Life and Beauty

River Life and Beauty Brown skin girls with their babbling babies, romance the river god scattering petals of red hibiscus. Naked honeyed bodies shamelessly glow golden, as ripples slowly trickle down lithe sun-kissed legs. Cool silver droplets brazenly caress taut, dark nipples. 03-02-2017 Contest: River Line Sponsor: Rick Parise Placement: 1st

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Anil Deo

Date: 5/20/2018 1:58:00 PM

Well, I would virtually swear I saw them in Mauritius, and again in Fiji. Yep ... Brown Girls know how to hae fun. Inspiring write, with echoes of Tolkien and Middle Earth.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/21/2018 2:12:00 PM

Hello Anil, what lovely comments and high compliments! Thank you, my friend! Hugs. Pandita

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/19/2018 8:10:00 PM

Hello Pandita, this poem is beautifully written. I can see the scenes as iIread this poem. have a nice evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/20/2018 8:21:00 PM

Love and hugs to you aswell.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/19/2018 8:37:00 PM

Hi Darlene, thank you for passing by and for your sweet compliments which I truly appreciate! Love and hugs. Pandita

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 10/31/2017 6:19:00 PM

Very well written a beautiful descriptive pose of the female body along with wonderful homage to the also beautiful lands. Great write and win. Thanks for sharing Pandita James

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/13/2017 12:42:00 PM

Thank you my friend. I always appreciate your visits and continued support! Have a lovely day! Pandita

Harshita Chaudhary

Date: 10/19/2017 1:37:00 AM

Very beautiful poem. River's filled with beauty. Thanks for sharing.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 10/19/2017 11:12:00 AM

Hi Harshita, I am so happy you stopped by and glad that you enjoyed reading this piece. Thank you for your wonderful supportive compliments! Best regards. Pandita

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/1/2017 10:38:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful in content and imagery. Very visual, captivating and sensual! Congrats on your well-deserved win on this exquisite poem Pandita! :)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 9/3/2017 6:09:00 PM

My dear Susan, thank you for stopping by and leaving your superlative complimentary words. Warmest regards. Pandita

Ronald A. Williams

Date: 8/6/2017 10:14:00 AM

Nice description of a lovely brown lady.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/6/2017 7:36:00 PM

Hi Ron, thank you so much for swinging by and leaving your sweet compliments! I really appreciate hearing from you! Best wishes. Pandita

Kika Ayala

Date: 6/10/2017 2:15:00 PM

Lovely poem brings back memories of my youth when we used to wash our laundry and bath in the river! Beautiful, sensual imagery! You just know how to pen it! Hugs and love! Kika

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/12/2017 12:12:00 PM

Hi Kika, it's always good to hear from you! Thank you kindly for your lovely compliments! Hugs. Pandita

Eve Roper

Date: 5/25/2017 2:56:00 PM

Wow,,, awesome... Pandita, have missed you writing.. well deserved win Hugs ~*

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/25/2017 3:21:00 PM

Thank you, thank you, my sweet friend! Always love to hear from you! Hugs. Pandita

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 4/4/2017 3:40:00 AM

Excellent and well penned. No doubt, this one deserves a top placement. Congrats.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 4/4/2017 11:28:00 AM

Many thanks, dear Ravi! I appreciate your kind support! All the best to you. Pandita

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/4/2017 12:12:00 AM

Well done on you first placement!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 4/4/2017 11:27:00 AM

Awww! Thank you so much, Richard! I'm always happy to hear from you! Glad you enjoyed this piece! Hugs. Pandita

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 3/29/2017 8:41:00 AM

Congrats Pandita, for your well-deserved first placement, with this wonderful piece!! ;-)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 3/30/2017 9:42:00 AM

Hi Teddy, it's always good to hear from you! Thank you kindly for your lovely compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita

Robert Lindley

Date: 3/26/2017 6:01:00 AM

Truly exceptional sensual poem my friend. As the fortunate husband of a brown skin lady, I know of that which you describe.. My wife Riza is a Philippine beauty with a heart of gold.. Congrats on your win!

Robert Lindley
Date: 6/13/2017 6:18:00 PM

Just dropped by to read yet again this wondrous and sensual poem. A true gem of creativity, vision and immense talent! God bless you and yours my friend...

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 3/28/2017 2:09:00 PM

My Dear friend, Robert, it is always lovely to hear from you and receive your wonderful complimentary words! Glad you enjoyed this piece! Hope you and Riza are having a beautiful day! Hugs. Pandita

John Michaels

Date: 3/20/2017 4:29:00 PM

Just thought I'd drop by again to congratulate you on your First Place win!! Gets even better on repeated readings! Well done!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 3/23/2017 10:19:00 AM

My Dear friend, John, thank you for swinging back. It is always lovely to hear from you and receive your wonderful complimentary words! Hope you are having a beautiful day! Hugs. Pandita

Lukas Ficklin

Date: 3/20/2017 11:11:00 AM

This one deserves a top placement! Sharp imagery interwoven with alliteration and perfect word choice all in this short form.... great writing Pandita!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 3/20/2017 1:13:00 PM

Hello Lukas, thank you for stopping by and leaving your superlative complimentary words. Warmest regards. Pandita

Doug Vinson

Date: 3/19/2017 1:45:00 PM

Excellent, Pandita - you paint quite a picture there. : )

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 3/19/2017 2:54:00 PM

Awww! Thank you so much, Doug! I'm always happy to hear from you! Glad you enjoyed this piece! Hugs. Pandita

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/19/2017 7:57:00 AM

Back to congratulate you Pandita, well deserved...

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 3/19/2017 2:52:00 PM

Many thanks again, dear Charlie! I appreciate your kind support! All the best to you. Pandita

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 3/19/2017 5:21:00 AM

excellent! this has everything: striking, sensual imagery, alliteration, internal rhyme...congrats on a well deserved 1st!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 3/19/2017 2:49:00 PM

Hi Charlotte, I am so happy you stopped by and that you enjoyed reading this piece. Thank you for your wonderful supportive compliments! Best regards. Pandita

Joseph May

Date: 3/18/2017 9:03:00 PM

Congrats on your first place win Pandita

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 3/19/2017 2:48:00 PM

Joseph, thank you for your kind words!! Hugs. Pandita

Rick Parise

Date: 3/18/2017 8:22:00 PM

Lovely....Congrats!!!!!!!!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 3/19/2017 2:44:00 PM

Hi Rick, thank you so much! While I was challenged conceptualizing this piece, I am super delighted and honored that you placed it at the top of your winners' list! Best regards. Pandita

James Inman

Date: 3/18/2017 5:12:00 PM

A beautiful write and beautiful imagery Pandita.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 3/19/2017 2:45:00 PM

Thank you, James, I am so happy that you like this piece! Best wishes. Pandita

Phillip Garcia

Date: 3/18/2017 4:21:00 PM

Ooh my. Congratulations on a wonderful poem and for making me blush. Great job

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 3/19/2017 2:47:00 PM

Hi Phillip, I am so happy you stopped by and that you enjoyed reading this piece. Thank you for your comment and lovely compliments! Pandita

Rita Solis Radius

Date: 3/17/2017 9:00:00 AM

Hi, Pandita! Well written...i love this!! Thank you for sharing it on PoetrySoup!!! Rita. ^^

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 3/17/2017 9:27:00 PM

Hi Rita, thank you so much for visiting and leaving such a lovely compliment! Hope you are enjoying a beautiful weekend! Pandita

Paul Callus

Date: 3/14/2017 12:40:00 PM

What a beautiful sensual picture you paint with just six strokes of your poetic brush, Pandita! I imagine this to be taking place in a far eastern country. Always a pleasure to read your work. #7 Warm regards // paul

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 3/15/2017 10:10:00 AM

Paul, my Dear friend, it is always lovely to hear from you and receive your wonderful complimentary words and high score! I'm so delighted that you enjoyed this piece! Hope you are having a beautiful day! Hugs. Pandita

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 3/12/2017 5:22:00 AM

Excellent. Sounds like a sensuous poem. A lovely scene too. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 3/12/2017 7:55:00 PM

Hi Ravi, it's always good to hear from you! Thank you kindly for your lovely compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 3/7/2017 12:47:00 AM

The imagery in this write is incredible, wow to you and a definite 7 also going in my favourites so I can reread again and again. Thank you

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 3/8/2017 1:20:00 PM

Hello Elizabeth, thanks for stopping by and leaving your superlative complimentary words and high score. Warmest regards. Pandita