Pandita Sietesantos Poet Verse

River Life and Beauty

River Life and Beauty

Brown skin girls 
with their babbling babies,
romance the river god
scattering petals of red hibiscus.

Naked honeyed bodies
shamelessly glow golden, 
as ripples slowly trickle down
lithe sun-kissed legs.

Cool silver droplets brazenly
caress taut, dark nipples.


03-02-2017

Contest:      River Line
Sponsor:      Rick Parise
Placement:  1st

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Anil Deo May 20, 2018 at 1:58 PM Well, I would virtually swear I saw them in Mauritius, and again in Fiji. Yep ... Brown Girls know how to hae fun. Inspiring write, with echoes of Tolkien and Middle Earth. Pandita Sietesantos May 21, 2018 at 2:12 PM Hello Anil, what lovely comments and high compliments! Thank you, my friend! Hugs. Pandita

Darlene De Beaulieu February 19, 2018 at 8:10 PM Hello Pandita, this poem is beautifully written. I can see the scenes as iIread this poem. have a nice evening my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu February 20, 2018 at 8:21 PM Love and hugs to you aswell. Pandita Sietesantos February 19, 2018 at 8:37 PM Hi Darlene, thank you for passing by and for your sweet compliments which I truly appreciate! Love and hugs. Pandita

James Edward Lee Sr. October 31, 2017 at 6:19 PM Very well written a beautiful descriptive pose of the female body along with wonderful homage to the also beautiful lands. Great write and win. Thanks for sharing Pandita James Pandita Sietesantos November 13, 2017 at 12:42 PM Thank you my friend. I always appreciate your visits and continued support! Have a lovely day! Pandita

Harshita Chaudhary October 19, 2017 at 1:37 AM Very beautiful poem. River's filled with beauty. Thanks for sharing. Pandita Sietesantos October 19, 2017 at 11:12 AM Hi Harshita, I am so happy you stopped by and glad that you enjoyed reading this piece. Thank you for your wonderful supportive compliments! Best regards. Pandita

Susan Ashley September 1, 2017 at 10:38 PM Absolutely beautiful in content and imagery. Very visual, captivating and sensual! Congrats on your well-deserved win on this exquisite poem Pandita! :) Pandita Sietesantos September 3, 2017 at 6:09 PM My dear Susan, thank you for stopping by and leaving your superlative complimentary words. Warmest regards. Pandita

Ronald A. Williams August 6, 2017 at 10:14 AM Nice description of a lovely brown lady. Pandita Sietesantos August 6, 2017 at 7:36 PM Hi Ron, thank you so much for swinging by and leaving your sweet compliments! I really appreciate hearing from you! Best wishes. Pandita

Kika Ayala June 10, 2017 at 2:15 PM Lovely poem brings back memories of my youth when we used to wash our laundry and bath in the river! Beautiful, sensual imagery! You just know how to pen it! Hugs and love! Kika Pandita Sietesantos June 12, 2017 at 12:12 PM Hi Kika, it's always good to hear from you! Thank you kindly for your lovely compliments! Hugs. Pandita

Eve Roper May 25, 2017 at 2:56 PM Wow,,, awesome... Pandita, have missed you writing.. well deserved win Hugs ~* Pandita Sietesantos May 25, 2017 at 3:21 PM Thank you, thank you, my sweet friend! Always love to hear from you! Hugs. Pandita

Ravi Sathasivam April 4, 2017 at 3:40 AM Excellent and well penned. No doubt, this one deserves a top placement. Congrats. Pandita Sietesantos April 4, 2017 at 11:28 AM Many thanks, dear Ravi! I appreciate your kind support! All the best to you. Pandita

Richard Lamoureux April 4, 2017 at 12:12 AM Well done on you first placement! Pandita Sietesantos April 4, 2017 at 11:27 AM Awww! Thank you so much, Richard! I'm always happy to hear from you! Glad you enjoyed this piece! Hugs. Pandita

Teddy Kimathi March 29, 2017 at 8:41 AM Congrats Pandita, for your well-deserved first placement, with this wonderful piece!! ;-) Pandita Sietesantos March 30, 2017 at 9:42 AM Hi Teddy, it's always good to hear from you! Thank you kindly for your lovely compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita

Robert Lindley March 26, 2017 at 6:01 AM Truly exceptional sensual poem my friend. As the fortunate husband of a brown skin lady, I know of that which you describe.. My wife Riza is a Philippine beauty with a heart of gold.. Congrats on your win! Robert Lindley June 13, 2017 at 6:18 PM Just dropped by to read yet again this wondrous and sensual poem. A true gem of creativity, vision and immense talent! God bless you and yours my friend... Pandita Sietesantos March 28, 2017 at 2:09 PM My Dear friend, Robert, it is always lovely to hear from you and receive your wonderful complimentary words! Glad you enjoyed this piece! Hope you and Riza are having a beautiful day! Hugs. Pandita

John Michaels March 20, 2017 at 4:29 PM Just thought I'd drop by again to congratulate you on your First Place win!! Gets even better on repeated readings! Well done! Pandita Sietesantos March 23, 2017 at 10:19 AM My Dear friend, John, thank you for swinging back. It is always lovely to hear from you and receive your wonderful complimentary words! Hope you are having a beautiful day! Hugs. Pandita

Lukas Ficklin March 20, 2017 at 11:11 AM This one deserves a top placement! Sharp imagery interwoven with alliteration and perfect word choice all in this short form.... great writing Pandita! Pandita Sietesantos March 20, 2017 at 1:13 PM Hello Lukas, thank you for stopping by and leaving your superlative complimentary words. Warmest regards. Pandita

Doug Vinson March 19, 2017 at 1:45 PM Excellent, Pandita - you paint quite a picture there. : ) Pandita Sietesantos March 19, 2017 at 2:54 PM Awww! Thank you so much, Doug! I'm always happy to hear from you! Glad you enjoyed this piece! Hugs. Pandita

Charlie Smith March 19, 2017 at 7:57 AM Back to congratulate you Pandita, well deserved... Pandita Sietesantos March 19, 2017 at 2:52 PM Many thanks again, dear Charlie! I appreciate your kind support! All the best to you. Pandita

Charlotte Puddifoot March 19, 2017 at 5:21 AM excellent! this has everything: striking, sensual imagery, alliteration, internal rhyme...congrats on a well deserved 1st! Pandita Sietesantos March 19, 2017 at 2:49 PM Hi Charlotte, I am so happy you stopped by and that you enjoyed reading this piece. Thank you for your wonderful supportive compliments! Best regards. Pandita

Joseph May March 18, 2017 at 9:03 PM Congrats on your first place win Pandita Pandita Sietesantos March 19, 2017 at 2:48 PM Joseph, thank you for your kind words!! Hugs. Pandita

James Inman March 18, 2017 at 5:12 PM A beautiful write and beautiful imagery Pandita. Pandita Sietesantos March 19, 2017 at 2:45 PM Thank you, James, I am so happy that you like this piece! Best wishes. Pandita

Phillip Garcia March 18, 2017 at 4:21 PM Ooh my. Congratulations on a wonderful poem and for making me blush. Great job Pandita Sietesantos March 19, 2017 at 2:47 PM Hi Phillip, I am so happy you stopped by and that you enjoyed reading this piece. Thank you for your comment and lovely compliments! Pandita

Rita Solis Radius March 17, 2017 at 9:00 AM Hi, Pandita! Well written...i love this!! Thank you for sharing it on PoetrySoup!!! Rita. ^^ Pandita Sietesantos March 17, 2017 at 9:27 PM Hi Rita, thank you so much for visiting and leaving such a lovely compliment! Hope you are enjoying a beautiful weekend! Pandita

Paul Callus March 14, 2017 at 12:40 PM What a beautiful sensual picture you paint with just six strokes of your poetic brush, Pandita! I imagine this to be taking place in a far eastern country. Always a pleasure to read your work. #7 Warm regards // paul Pandita Sietesantos March 15, 2017 at 10:10 AM Paul, my Dear friend, it is always lovely to hear from you and receive your wonderful complimentary words and high score! I'm so delighted that you enjoyed this piece! Hope you are having a beautiful day! Hugs. Pandita

Ravi Sathasivam March 12, 2017 at 5:22 AM Excellent. Sounds like a sensuous poem. A lovely scene too. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Pandita Sietesantos March 12, 2017 at 7:55 PM Hi Ravi, it's always good to hear from you! Thank you kindly for your lovely compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita

Elizabeth Kinch March 7, 2017 at 12:47 AM The imagery in this write is incredible, wow to you and a definite 7 also going in my favourites so I can reread again and again. Thank you Pandita Sietesantos March 8, 2017 at 1:20 PM Hello Elizabeth, thanks for stopping by and leaving your superlative complimentary words and high score. Warmest regards. Pandita

Vladislav Raven March 5, 2017 at 6:08 PM Hi Pandita, another excellent piece from your pen. I love the picture displayed in this sensual write. I find a peace within the words. Your heart sings its song once more. Such gentle beauty. This has to be a seven. Hugs....Mike. XX Pandita Sietesantos March 6, 2017 at 9:04 AM My Dear friend, Mike, it is always lovely to hear from you and receive your wonderful complimentary words! Glad you enjoyed this piece! Hope you are having a beautiful day! Hugs. Pandita

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