River Child

The monster Kappa infrequently jumps out of its watery hideout to pull pranks as well as attacks only women. It, too, pulls people in the water to drown them. The color, figure, size and features vary clearly of this river child
+++++++ **Based on Japanese folklore of the child-sized Kappa or “river child” ** June 3, 2014 Form : Trois Par Huit Tenth Place win Contest: Body of water by Andrea
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Gibson Avatar
June 16, 2014 at 9:06 PM
Congratulations, Dr. Mehta, on a worth win.
Kendrick Avatar
June 16, 2014 at 11:42 AM
I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it of exceptional quality. Sara
Devonshire Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 6:52 PM
Dear Dr. Ram, I hadn't heard of the "Kappa" before this and I love the way you worked it into your write. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Johnson Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 3:20 PM
This is a new tale for me. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Smith Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 11:11 AM
Congrats on a great win, Dr. Mehta..Rivers, like life itself; if we could see all the bad in either, we would be hesitant to approach... Hugs.. Arlene..
Mohn Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 10:40 AM
Congrats...interesting take on the contest
Gorelick Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 10:03 AM
An interesting story..congrats on your win. BG
Callus Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 7:38 AM
Lovely and informative write, Dr. Ram. Congrats on your win. // paul
May Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 6:19 AM
Nicely done Dr Ram...congrats on the win
A. Sharma Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 5:36 AM
Unique take on this Dr Ram ! Wonderful write ,, congrats on win ! Thanks for visit on my page !
Sietesantos Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 1:15 AM
Congratulations, Dr. Ram on your win for a very unique write!
Dietrich Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 1:00 AM
glad to see you on my winners' list, Dr. ram. I was hoping for a poem about the actual river but it was very interesting to learn of this river child!!
May Avatar
June 6, 2014 at 7:44 AM
Very nicely penned Dr Ram...I've read that the Amazon is also called the River Sea...thanks for stopping by
Lindley Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 7:56 AM
Great write my friend. Monsters are real. Too many disappear into rivers for them not to be... Bravo on a fine write!!
Sharma Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 4:16 AM
VERY BEAUTIFULLY EXPRESSED.
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