River Challenge

flowing together 
  licking dew drops
     exchanging warmth
         melting into jelly, yet
            unsatiated we remain.
        hurtling down slopes
     into a secret valley
  rushing to unite,
slip, gush, hold tight.
Negotiating riverine
   meandering curves
    union becomes serene
          before surrender, into 
              an ocean, of ecstatic joy.


5.6.2020

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Date: 6/8/2020 4:59:00 PM
Such a rush given by your sensual write, Mohan! Congratulations on your top win. Regards // paul
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/9/2020 7:33:00 AM
Thankyou Paul for your liking and encouragement. Hope all well at your end. Best. Mohan
Date: 6/8/2020 9:14:00 AM
Your words create a flow enveloping a gradual rush and then soothing till the end. Congratulations on your win :)
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/8/2020 10:27:00 AM
Thankyou Aditi. And congrats to you for your own wonderful muse. Best. Mohan
Date: 6/8/2020 6:35:00 AM
Hello sir, You have expressed an amazing sensual write on river. :-) Congratulations on your win:-) Good luck for other works too. Take care.With Regards.~Deepa
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/8/2020 6:42:00 AM
Deepa, thanx for your wishes. And congrats to you also for being finely placed in the winner list. Best. Mohan
Date: 6/7/2020 8:35:00 PM
Beautiful sensual imagery, Mohan. Congratulations on your #1 placement ~ John
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/8/2020 6:40:00 AM
John, thanx for your wishes.
Date: 6/6/2020 6:42:00 AM
Great poem, really well expressed..
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/6/2020 9:16:00 AM
Glad you liked it. Thanx for encouraging. Mohan
Date: 6/5/2020 1:09:00 PM
Nice way to describe love as river rapids! Good luck with the competition!
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/6/2020 9:15:00 AM
Krish, thanks for encouraging. Mohan
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