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River Challenge

flowing together licking dew drops exchanging warmth melting into jelly, yet unsatiated we remain. hurtling down slopes into a secret valley rushing to unite, slip, gush, hold tight. Negotiating riverine meandering curves union becomes serene before surrender, into an ocean, of ecstatic joy. 5.6.2020

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Paul Callus

Date: 6/8/2020 4:59:00 PM

Such a rush given by your sensual write, Mohan! Congratulations on your top win. Regards // paul

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/9/2020 7:33:00 AM

Thankyou Paul for your liking and encouragement. Hope all well at your end. Best. Mohan

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/8/2020 9:14:00 AM

Your words create a flow enveloping a gradual rush and then soothing till the end. Congratulations on your win :)

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/8/2020 10:27:00 AM

Thankyou Aditi. And congrats to you for your own wonderful muse. Best. Mohan

V. Deepa

Date: 6/8/2020 6:35:00 AM

Hello sir, You have expressed an amazing sensual write on river. :-) Congratulations on your win:-) Good luck for other works too. Take care.With Regards.~Deepa

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/8/2020 6:42:00 AM

Deepa, thanx for your wishes. And congrats to you also for being finely placed in the winner list. Best. Mohan