Mohan Chutani Poet Free verse

River Challenge

flowing together 
  licking dew drops
     exchanging warmth
         melting into jelly, yet
            unsatiated we remain.
        hurtling down slopes
     into a secret valley
  rushing to unite,
slip, gush, hold tight.
Negotiating riverine
   meandering curves
    union becomes serene
          before surrender, into 
              an ocean, of ecstatic joy.


5.6.2020

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Paul Callus June 8, 2020 at 4:59 PM Such a rush given by your sensual write, Mohan! Congratulations on your top win. Regards // paul Mohan Chutani June 9, 2020 at 7:33 AM Thankyou Paul for your liking and encouragement. Hope all well at your end. Best. Mohan

Aditi Mishra June 8, 2020 at 9:14 AM Your words create a flow enveloping a gradual rush and then soothing till the end. Congratulations on your win :) Mohan Chutani June 8, 2020 at 10:27 AM Thankyou Aditi. And congrats to you for your own wonderful muse. Best. Mohan

V. Deepa June 8, 2020 at 6:35 AM Hello sir, You have expressed an amazing sensual write on river. :-) Congratulations on your win:-) Good luck for other works too. Take care.With Regards.~Deepa Mohan Chutani June 8, 2020 at 6:42 AM Deepa, thanx for your wishes. And congrats to you also for being finely placed in the winner list. Best. Mohan

John Watt June 7, 2020 at 8:35 PM Beautiful sensual imagery, Mohan. Congratulations on your #1 placement ~ John Mohan Chutani June 8, 2020 at 6:40 AM John, thanx for your wishes.

Silent One June 6, 2020 at 6:42 AM Great poem, really well expressed.. Mohan Chutani June 6, 2020 at 9:16 AM Glad you liked it. Thanx for encouraging. Mohan

Krish Radhakrishna June 5, 2020 at 1:09 PM Nice way to describe love as river rapids! Good luck with the competition! Mohan Chutani June 6, 2020 at 9:15 AM Krish, thanks for encouraging. Mohan