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River At Sunset

setting sun adorns
the river’s long slender neck 
with sparkling diamonds.

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Saniya Galeyeva

August 1, 2011 at 9:37 AM

Oh, this is really a masterpiece. I love haikus!

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 27, 2011 at 10:58 AM

Congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "One Haiku" contest Sharon. Love, Carol

Sharon Well

June 27, 2011 at 11:56 AM

Thanks, Carol :)

Elaine George

June 26, 2011 at 1:08 AM

Beautiful picture you paint with this lovely Haiku, Sharon. Lainie

Sharon Well

June 27, 2011 at 11:57 AM

Thanks, Elaine :)

Sara Kendrick

June 25, 2011 at 5:37 PM

Great description..Congrats..Sara

Sharon Well

June 27, 2011 at 11:57 AM

Thanks, Sara :) Waiting to read your latest post.

Debbie Guzzi

June 25, 2011 at 5:48 AM

Hi sharon what you have above is an exquiste sentence [you knew that which is why you instinctively put a period] haiku must have 2 parts, part 2 giving sensory input and no poetic vehicle such as personification [neck of river] can be used. Hope this helps! Light & Love

Sharon Well

June 27, 2011 at 11:56 AM

thank you so much for your valuable tips, Debbie. Will keep this in mind for next time.