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River At Sunset

setting sun adorns the river’s long slender neck with sparkling diamonds.

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Saniya Galeyeva

Date: 8/1/2011 9:37:00 AM

Oh, this is really a masterpiece. I love haikus!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/27/2011 10:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "One Haiku" contest Sharon. Love, Carol

Sharon Well
Date: 6/27/2011 11:56:00 AM

Thanks, Carol :)

Elaine George

Date: 6/26/2011 1:08:00 AM

Beautiful picture you paint with this lovely Haiku, Sharon. Lainie

Sharon Well
Date: 6/27/2011 11:57:00 AM

Thanks, Elaine :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/25/2011 5:37:00 PM

Great description..Congrats..Sara

Sharon Well
Date: 6/27/2011 11:57:00 AM

Thanks, Sara :) Waiting to read your latest post.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/25/2011 5:48:00 AM

Hi sharon what you have above is an exquiste sentence [you knew that which is why you instinctively put a period] haiku must have 2 parts, part 2 giving sensory input and no poetic vehicle such as personification [neck of river] can be used. Hope this helps! Light & Love

Sharon Well
Date: 6/27/2011 11:56:00 AM

thank you so much for your valuable tips, Debbie. Will keep this in mind for next time.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/24/2011 11:31:00 PM

This is beautiful, Sharon! Really enjoyed the imagery of that river's neck adorned :) Congrats for being in the winners' circle :D

Sharon Well
Date: 6/27/2011 11:58:00 AM

Thank you so much! Your comments mean a lot to a novice like me. Glad you enjoyed it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2011 9:14:00 PM

This one is really beautiful, Sharon!! Love that image you painted.

Sharon Well
Date: 6/27/2011 11:59:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/24/2011 6:49:00 PM

Congrats Sharon on your HM in the contest with this beautiful write luv.. wonderful words..enjoy..