David Mohn Poet Tetractys

River

zen
                      serpent
                     knavishly 
                   meandering-
     slithering away just as it arrives

                   David Mohn
        Language of Water Contest
                ~08 Dec 2015~

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Skat A December 14, 2015 at 9:41 PM DAVID, CONGRATULATIONS, on your win. **SKAT**

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores December 11, 2015 at 8:14 AM Congratulations David.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 10, 2015 at 11:01 PM Congrats on wonderful write n win david!

Barbara Gorelick December 10, 2015 at 12:16 PM Wow, love how your mind works. This is awesome. Congrats, would have placed it higher...BG

Paul Callus December 10, 2015 at 11:22 AM Top marks for this lovely and clever entry, David. A contender for a higher placement:) Congrats on this fine win. // paul

James Inman December 10, 2015 at 8:17 AM Never stopping David. Lovely calming write.

Nette Onclaud December 10, 2015 at 4:29 AM i like the play of movement here, david..sweet congrats and thanks for supporting my contest..huggs