River

zen serpent knavishly meandering- slithering away just as it arrives David Mohn Language of Water Contest ~08 Dec 2015~

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Skat A

Date: 12/14/2015 9:41:00 PM

DAVID, CONGRATULATIONS, on your win. **SKAT**

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/11/2015 8:14:00 AM

Congratulations David.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/10/2015 11:01:00 PM

Congrats on wonderful write n win david!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/10/2015 12:16:00 PM

Wow, love how your mind works. This is awesome. Congrats, would have placed it higher...BG

Paul Callus

Date: 12/10/2015 11:22:00 AM

Top marks for this lovely and clever entry, David. A contender for a higher placement:) Congrats on this fine win. // paul

James Inman

Date: 12/10/2015 8:17:00 AM

Never stopping David. Lovely calming write.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/10/2015 4:29:00 AM

i like the play of movement here, david..sweet congrats and thanks for supporting my contest..huggs