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River

River flows zigzag way, 
Ruminates of what my,  
Reflections mean to me, 
Relentless or shaky, 
Represents me in you, 
Refrains of water stream, 
Raises inspiring thoughts.

Copyright © Jay Narain | Year Posted 2023

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Paula Goldsmith

September 8, 2023 at 11:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely "River" Pleiades write. Have a fun day writing away..............

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 8, 2023 at 2:04 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Jay :) - hugs

September 7, 2023 at 5:58 PM

Nicely done, Jay! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

September 7, 2023 at 5:47 PM

Congrats on your win Jay, Very nicely pennned

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 6, 2023 at 5:16 AM

- A great River Pleiades, Jay :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

September 4, 2023 at 11:05 PM

Your poem flows like a river relentless ! Great entry for the contest! All the Best Jay !

Andrea Dietrich

September 4, 2023 at 2:38 PM

Great theme for this contest,Jay. This form is so fun to read

September 3, 2023 at 10:33 PM

This is really good Jay. BOL.

September 3, 2023 at 8:55 PM

Nicely composed. All the best.

September 3, 2023 at 12:58 PM

Well done, Jay~~descriptive tribute to a river. Janice

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