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River

River flows zigzag way, Ruminates of what my, Reflections mean to me, Relentless or shaky, Represents me in you, Refrains of water stream, Raises inspiring thoughts.

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Date: 9/8/2023 11:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely "River" Pleiades write. Have a fun day writing away..............
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Date: 9/8/2023 2:04:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Jay :) - hugs
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Date: 9/7/2023 5:58:00 PM
Nicely done, Jay! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 9/7/2023 5:47:00 PM
Congrats on your win Jay, Very nicely pennned
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Date: 9/6/2023 5:16:00 AM
- A great River Pleiades, Jay :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 9/4/2023 11:05:00 PM
Your poem flows like a river relentless ! Great entry for the contest! All the Best Jay !
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Date: 9/4/2023 2:38:00 PM
Great theme for this contest,Jay. This form is so fun to read
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Date: 9/3/2023 10:33:00 PM
This is really good Jay. BOL.
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Date: 9/3/2023 8:55:00 PM
Nicely composed. All the best.
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Date: 9/3/2023 12:58:00 PM
Well done, Jay~~descriptive tribute to a river. Janice
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