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Rivals To Consider

If I had more time, I might have spent it more wisely. Until I return to my heels and the nothingness timely  I was guided by those who had gone before me.  I can view my way of hiding as pacing steadily. This method will be sought by my fellow adversary. They were sure they didn't have to start over shortly.  My disgrace by incompetents is nothing, really. I'm like the sun setting over Saturn's ring anatomy.
Written: Nov 10, 2021
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Kendrick Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 8:16 AM
Good one written by your creative hand. I enjoyed reading it today. The picture is awesome. The rivers and tributaries are wonderful. People are our tributaries each person we come in contact with adds something to our life. Here's hoping only clean water flowed into yours. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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November 11, 2021 at 1:18 AM
We must use time wisely. Well writ.
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