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Rivals

I did friendship with cool breeze Because it passed from my window From her window Because it understood my mood And comforted me When my heart was broken And I needed someone Because I couldn’t find a better messenger than it So I did friendship with breeze But I didn’t know Breeze is my rival in love I saw it playing with her hair It broke my trust Never do friendship with cool breeze

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Date: 10/3/2018 9:15:00 AM
This is such a cool poem Ammar! Enjoyed :)
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