Rivals
I did friendship with cool breeze
Because it passed from my window
From her window
Because it understood my mood
And comforted me
When my heart was broken
And I needed someone
Because I couldn’t find a better messenger than it
So
I did friendship with breeze
But I didn’t know
Breeze is my rival in love
I saw it playing with her hair
It broke my trust
Never do friendship with cool breeze
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