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Rival Crab

The fiddler crab waves his giant claw A rival crab has got him beat Small clawed female watches in awe The fiddler crab waves his giant claw Small clawed female stiffles a haugh Unimpressed watches his defeat The fiddler crab waves his giant claw A rival crab has got him beat

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Jack Horne

Date: 10/26/2014 10:30:00 AM

awww, poor fiddler crab, hope he finds another crab lady, lol

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/24/2014 9:46:00 PM

What a tremendous write my dear friend! I have missed you while I was away! I missed your wondrous poetry! I will only be around for a few days as I have to get back to school again, but I thought I'd bring some Halloween cheer with me while I'm here! This is a lovely poem Sara! I really enjoyed reading this illustrious piece this evening! You have impressed me yet again with your exquisite talents! Great Work!!

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/24/2014 4:34:00 PM

I love this Sara. It is really great as a Triolet. It is lots of fun to read.