Rituals

Red tears run down my arm, My pain barely visable, I laugh in strange charm, Closing my eyes to see you, Dementia Sets, I`m suddenly next in cue, I feel it in my heart, Darkness all I can view, I Don`t really mind, I`ll face, attempt my amend(s) Happyness I find, For anything can happen, I can wish to die, I can wish I hadn`t been, I watch life pass me by, (and) I pretend to slowly die.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 5/23/2024 1:38:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/12/2016 11:20:00 PM

CURTIS, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2010 4:21:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Curtis. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/29/2010 2:44:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. there are many contests offered on this site.. check them out and enter... good luck.. with luv..

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 8/29/2010 10:06:00 AM

Welcome to the soup. If you need any thing just ask

Thvia Shetley

Date: 8/29/2010 1:10:00 AM

Hi Curtis, welcome to the site, I'm new here too but so far am loving it! I enjoyed this poem, as heart-wrenching as it is. You did a good job evoking emotion with your imagery. Other than some spelling and grammar nitpicks, this is top notch! Thanks for the read!