Rites of Passage

Down the hot sun,
I crumble down the snowflakes, 

One minute,
One tribute, 

Let's have a wintry solitude, 
Wrapped in a flesher's heartbrokenness, 

I derelict this relict calf love,
Squall on this spur,
Am peel in peals... 

Scuttle the fondle, 
Dottle the dawdle, 

Harbouring an everlasting embosom...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kendrick Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 1:42 PM
Congrats on this winner. Way to go. Sara
Kara Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 11:31 PM
Thank you Sara.
Alex Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 11:42 PM
This is beautiful work. Congratulations!
Kara Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 5:16 AM
Thank you.
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