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Risk Taker

Spent a little time in a world so right Thousands of words filled my night Met a little filly, I would call my own Casting my fears into the great unknown I heard her unique beat, saw her dance We started our own poetic romance Two hearts, one voice, singing in unison Sipping the same soup, we dived right in She's a mover, a shaker. A real risk taker A diamond, an ace, She rocks this place Wonders never cease, she's the one Many duets are sure to come No drama, no games, she's insane Her rap is better than Lil Wayne She'll cuss like a sailor, rhyme like Seuss She'll give you love and take your abuse I found an angel, she found a friend This connection is without an end She's a mover, a shaker. A real risk taker A diamond, an ace, She rocks this place A hundred voices, a thousand choices The bowl of soup fills, with all styles and skills. Two peas in a pod, too alike to be odd Sharing this with you, our soup is not stew Casarah Nance Tim Smith 06/03/2014

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Date: 7/16/2014 6:02:00 AM
A top7 rating for this collaboration; well done Casarah&Tim. Has always sounded like the perfect duet to me! The chemistry is there; I would not say keep experimenting, for I believe you have already found the winning formula. Congrats on another deserved win! // paul
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Casarah Nance
Date: 7/16/2014 4:05:00 PM
aww that is so sweet paul, i want to frame that comment :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/16/2014 3:51:00 PM
Thank you Paul from Casarah and me. We have co-written close to 30 poems together and I am still amazed how easy it is to write with her.
Date: 7/15/2014 7:54:00 PM
I see that rhyme and it's real fine!Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/16/2014 11:25:00 AM
Thanks Debbie from both me and Casarah.... Hugs
Date: 7/15/2014 7:38:00 PM
wow sorry I missed this - was at time Dad was in hospital so i wasn't around too much - an awesome lyric and a worthy winner hugs jan xxx
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/16/2014 11:17:00 AM
Thanks Jan....both Cas an I had a blast writing this one....hugs Tim
Date: 7/15/2014 2:07:00 PM
Hi CT, congratulations on a TOP well-deserved win. I truly enjoyed reading this gem. Bravo.
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/15/2014 4:29:00 PM
Thank You Pandita...hugs Tim
Date: 7/15/2014 10:11:00 AM
Well, keep on playing your sweet tune, you two! Congrats on a great win! Hugs.. Arlene
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Casarah Nance
Date: 7/15/2014 6:01:00 PM
Thank you very much Arlene from both me and Tim :)
Date: 7/15/2014 9:55:00 AM
I remember a dancing tune with the title itself but well your lyrics are lovelier than it..:)!!! Congrats Tim and. Cas my friends..:) hugs and hugs mumuch!! Got pizza let's share..:)!
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/15/2014 6:59:00 PM
I'm In for some pie :) pizza pie :)
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Casarah Nance
Date: 7/15/2014 6:02:00 PM
Oh Yay I love pizza! thank you Olive you are too sweet.
Date: 7/15/2014 8:33:00 AM
Now this one sounds like a real song, not a poem! Kinda reminds me of 'The Joker' by Steve Miller. Congrats.
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Date: 7/15/2014 4:49:00 AM
This is awesome,, oh u lovely twosome,, congrats on huge win// Upma//
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/15/2014 4:28:00 PM
Thank you Dr. Upma...you are sweet...hugs Tim
Date: 6/4/2014 9:28:00 AM
Love this collaboration!!!! Bravo!!!!!!
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Tim Smith
Date: 6/5/2014 11:07:00 AM
Thanks Robert...Casarah did all the hard work,,,lol
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Casarah Nance
Date: 6/4/2014 3:16:00 PM
:) Thank you Robert, glad you stopped by to read it :)
Date: 6/4/2014 1:07:00 AM
Great read,...fab collab ...Seren
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Casarah Nance
Date: 6/4/2014 3:15:00 PM
Thank you very much Seren :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 6/4/2014 3:52:00 AM
Thanks Seren..it is so easy to write with Casarah... We feed off each other so well....hugs Tim

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