Rising Thoughts

High alpine meadows are dusted with wildflowers, And the faraway horizon is outlined with craggy mountain peaks, Half-asleep lights blink through the sun-painted mist, The sunrays dip at varying angles and intensities, creating mixed moods and mysteries ~ It feels good to be up at dawn. (Free verse) 12.07.2021
{Thank you, dear friend Meenu, for the inspiration}
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Goldsmith Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 7:03 AM
Congratulations on your win. Have a blessed day and New Year 2022.............
Radice Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 1:26 PM
I'm with you on the feeling good at dawn. Great descriptive work and well done in Brian's contest. Cheers - Gary
Rose  Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 2:53 PM
Yes dear Dawn is my favorite time of day and you can see so much , without the burning ray of sun, like all your past memories and all your future joys, nicely penned dear poet. thankyou for sharing. this. :)
Mcintosh Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 1:40 PM
Wonderful... I love it. And being up at dawn. Love it. God bless you my friend. Love, Gina
Buhagiar Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 9:00 AM
You paint a lovely picture. Great inspiration. ~~
Lane Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 7:20 AM
My favorite time of day when quiet reigns and my thoughts are my own. Nicely expressed, Jo.
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