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Rising Sun and Waning Moon

'Twas the time of Summer solstice, they wed
Verdant leaves clung to trees; the month was June
Whispered troths of love, sacred vows were said
'fore fauna, rising sun and waning moon

Prince Largent was soon to be crowned as king
but Mekram, the wise, held grief in his eyes
He smiled with joy when Asha wore the ring
Though death neared, he feigned a joyous disguise

Bodies joined, celestial and human
Festive auguries 'pon the forest floor
Skies aflame, trees canopied with lumen
Their world glows today, and forevermore

'Twas said to be just an immortal tale
but in June, astral light gleams in the vale

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/6/2019 8:45:00 AM
Just now found this exquisite romantic sonnet my dear friend. Its light shines through forest bright, its immense glow begs world to do right, its heart a mystical love dream, its soul cries love,hope and faith redeems... A fav...
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Date: 12/6/2018 5:54:00 PM
This is wonderfully composed and thoughtfully creative - I love the genre and you have brought beauty and integrity to it, (as you do most things). Blessings, Lin! :-) <3 (Do you know the song "Sun & Moon" sung by Lea Salonga in "Miss Saigon"? This reminded me ... that's one of my favorite songs, and I adore her voice. I got to meet her a few years ago).
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Date: 11/20/2018 12:44:00 PM
what a stunning romantic sonnet Lin, I feel transported to the realms of fantasy like the tales of King Arthur:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/21/2018 5:04:00 PM
Many thanks to you for your ever-kind comments, Jan. Sorry for replying so late, but Brennan has been keeping me busy.
Date: 11/20/2018 12:19:00 PM
A beautiful romantic fairy tale Lin, you write these so well Tom.
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Date: 11/21/2018 11:59:00 AM
How very kind are your comments. Thank you, Tom.
Date: 11/20/2018 11:10:00 AM
What a beautiful poem with a classic old world feel. I love the meter and the rhyme in this Lin. The story was wonderful and really took the mind to a magical place. Really nicely done.
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Date: 11/21/2018 11:59:00 AM
Thanks a bunch, Chris. Your gracious remarks are very much appreciated.