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Rising Sun

Rising sun Reminiscing lost days of togetherness, Iridescent emotions add colour to my life. Succour anticipates a revisit , Insufferable is seeking an end. Notional fire that once burnt inside the chest, Graces my soul that thrives for the best. Sun is sure to shine bright and high in sky. Unfeigned unending passion undulates, Nevermore echoes in lonely heart reverberate. Written October 7th, 2014 For contest 'Romantic acrostic' by Regina Riddle Awarded 7th place Now entered for "Best short acrostic poem" contest by Andrea

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Date: 10/9/2014 11:35:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Dr. Upma
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Date: 10/9/2014 8:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Dr. Sharma.
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Date: 10/8/2014 10:13:00 PM
beautiful, Dr. Upma! Congratulations!
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Date: 10/8/2014 5:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Dr. Sharma.
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Date: 10/8/2014 4:16:00 PM
A sad but beautiful poem..Ive going to fav this one. BG Congrats my dear.
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Date: 10/8/2014 4:09:00 PM
Congrats for your win, Dr. UPma. Beautiful thoughts.
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Date: 10/8/2014 3:54:00 PM
This has to be one of the best acrostics I've ever read, Dr. Upma. It speaks of hope as well as the loneliness that comes when we are unable to muster the urge to strive for the best. Well done! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/8/2014 11:15:00 AM
many congrats on your win Dr Sharma this is a beautiful poem sad beginning yet with hope at the end:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 10/7/2014 5:47:00 PM
This piece has a melancholy yet lovely tone to it with hope ever shinning in the distance. Beautiful!#7
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Date: 10/7/2014 10:39:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poem full of passionate emotions and strong feelings. Blessings, Darlene
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 10/7/2014 10:59:00 AM
Thnx for ur lovely visit n words Darlene my new friend!
Date: 10/7/2014 10:14:00 AM
Absolutely lovely poem!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 10/7/2014 10:23:00 AM
Thnx for ur visit Arthur! Appreciate!