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Rising Sun

The rising sun is as a blazing fire Casting red on the clouds of dark gray Clouds rippled as the sands on shore Or as a giant clam shell in its white and gray Sailors would take warning on this nippy Morning for the sun has risen red The colors constantly change soon demise Brevity of life soon gone..not like the sun In one little spot Eagle outline seen Swiftly he's gone like moving breeze Life similiar never remains same For now the color has changed..to gray

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/2/2010 12:48:00 AM
Awesome. Great work on the contrast.
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Date: 2/12/2010 5:32:00 PM
enjoyed
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Date: 2/12/2010 12:05:00 AM
Like the closing couplet imagery Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
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Date: 2/11/2010 11:14:00 PM
I love this poem ,especially the first verse--The rising Sun is a blazing fire..beautiful..Charma
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Date: 2/11/2010 7:22:00 PM
ohh. i bet seeing it in the sky of your home was even more breathtaking. i love sunrise almost as much as sunset<: -Always Lynette
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Date: 2/11/2010 5:20:00 PM
Lovely writing Sara, inspirational and moving
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Date: 2/11/2010 4:42:00 PM
A visual write Sara.. new Haiku contest called Sunrise from Raul ... this would be perfect to enter if Haiku was not required... amazing and vivid... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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