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Image result for pictures of sunrising with moon and mars in the western sky This is similar to the way the moon was on Monday in the western sky while the sun was rising. This is not a true Tanka. I don't have the correct syllable count so don't use it as an example.

The rising sun upon the horizon cast flamingo onto cobalt clouds. in the western sky hung a full silvery moon and mars shouting to me out loud

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Howard Kerr

Date: 3/6/2025 10:21:00 AM

Sara, Many thanks for your recent visit regarding Aside From Son. You have composed an epic haiku that is concise, creative, colourful and inspiring. Vivid contrasts in hues a particular highlight. Superb Howard

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/6/2025 11:23:00 AM

Thank you, Howard for saying superb. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/21/2025 7:39:00 PM

Lovely as your kus always are!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/22/2025 4:12:00 AM

Thank you, Kim. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2025 1:20:00 PM

Very nice one, Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/21/2025 2:53:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. I appreciate your visit and nice comment. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/17/2025 1:14:00 AM

Delightful poem, never mind the syllable count.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/17/2025 2:21:00 AM

Victor, Poetic License, so they say. I appreciate the uplifting spirit of your comments. Sara K

Valsa George

Date: 1/16/2025 8:43:00 PM

Though it may not be a proper tanka, this is certainly a beautiful poem. Dear Sara, you have painted a gorgeous night sky imagery!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/17/2025 2:19:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa. Your visits add a pleasant touch. Sara K

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/16/2025 1:06:00 PM

Sara, Impressive poetry on the universe. I just enjoy the moonlight, A poignant and wrenching poem. Your beautiful poetry is always a delight to read.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/16/2025 2:07:00 PM

Thank you, SP. I appreciate the visit and kind review of my work. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/16/2025 11:40:00 AM

- It's magical and beautiful, Sara... never gets tired of looking at the sunrise, sunset, moon and stars :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/16/2025 2:05:00 PM

Anne-Lise, I don't get to see the sunset very often and neither the night sky but when I do it is always special. Thanks for the visit and nice review. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/16/2025 10:47:00 AM

What a lovely "rising sun" write you have here. Pretty Picture... This week has been a pretty full moon. What A Great Ending... Have a fun day writing away..............

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/16/2025 2:04:00 PM

Yes, the picture is of the full moon and not the sun. They were both present in the sky that morning which was so lovely. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Tom Woody

Date: 1/16/2025 6:25:00 AM

Awesome cosmos poem. If Mars really did shout I wonder what he'd say to us? Hmmm

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/16/2025 8:43:00 AM

I don't know what mars would say unless maybe I'm burning hot. LOL..Thank you, Tom, for the visit. Sara K

Yann Rolland

Date: 1/16/2025 5:56:00 AM

i adore the lights of rose moon, i could here the moon calling your name, so nice poetry, thanks poet

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/16/2025 8:42:00 AM

Yann, I appreciate the visit and the nice review of my work. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 1/16/2025 5:33:00 AM

We did get a beautiful moon and still is so gorgeous too, i love the first full moon of 2025, ah dear sara you have a way with painting imagery and how lucky to be able to witness such gorgeous skies! Amazing! Thank you for sharing! Sending you light always

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/16/2025 8:41:00 AM

I E, I am glad you enjoyed the moon the other night/day. The reason I looked was because it was supposed to rise on the eastern horizon around 5:30 and mars was supposed to be there also, so I looked but it was too cloudy. The next morning, I went to let the dog out very early in the morn and it was such a beautiful sunrise that I thought I wonder if the moon is still up, and I looked out the window toward the west and there it was. Thanks for the visit. Sara K