This is similar to the way the moon was on Monday in the western sky while the sun was rising. This is not a true Tanka. I don't have the correct syllable count so don't use it as an example.
The rising sun upon the horizon cast flamingo onto cobalt clouds. in the western sky hung a full silvery moon and mars shouting to me out loud
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This is similar to the way the moon was on Monday in the western sky while the sun was rising. This is not a true Tanka. I don't have the correct syllable count so don't use it as an example.