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Rising Still

Rising Still

Like the tide during days of spring
with a subtle gentle breeze.
You will find I'm rising still
though I'm down on my knees.

Asking God to see me through
whatever comes my way.
Sending angels, come to me.
These are the things I pray.

Like never ending water
and waves out in the sea.
Help me to help others
is all I ask of thee.

Giving sight unto the blind
to see the things now hid.
Help me to help others
the way that Jesus did.

Let them see the light within
God give me light to shine.
Let me be for them today
the water turned to wine.

For the many broken now
that somehow lost their way.
Grant me gifts to give to them
in words that I might say.

Let them see the You in me
when life tears at their will.
And let them see the You in me
when they see I'm rising still.

Edwin C Hofert
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Das Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 11:34 PM
A beautiful prayer, the words so gently flow. #7
Hofert Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 7:54 AM
Thank you Nandita for the read and for the 7 and for being you. God bless. Ed
Gifford Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 11:21 PM
A sincere poem prayer that honors our Lord, and Savior. I'd give you a 7, but already see you have been given one.
Gifford Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 10:02 AM
Sorry, I didn't know they continued to add up. Here's your 7.
Hofert Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 7:53 AM
Thank you Darlene :) The more the merrier lol. Have a great day. Ed
Merryman Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 8:36 PM
I love this, Ed. A beautiful heartfelt prayer! Letting Jesus be seen in me is something I need to pray for daily. Thank you for this inspirational write. Love, Kim M
Hofert Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 7:52 AM
Thank you Kim. I think we all need this daily. God bless. Ed
Nunez Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 5:45 PM
Forgot the 7. :-)
Nunez Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 5:44 PM
Powerful write that anyone can relate to. This touches an inner chord. You wrapped it up perfectly with the last two lines. Be blessed, Ed, for you are a blessing. :-)
Hofert Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 7:02 PM
Thank you Kim. I hope that you are well. God Bless!! :)
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