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Author's Notes: This poem, "rising from out of this cold frozen wasteland," is a new co-authored write by Liam McDaid and me. We both thought that you might be interested in the particular metaphor we developed in this poem portraying a love that's discovered between a man and a women whose spirits, souls, and emotions unite as ONE putting them on the edge of a world that's very scared!! (Gary Bateman, December 20, 2014) (Free Verse poetic format)

Categories: allegory, beauty, emotions, feelings, love, metaphor, and together.

Rising From Out of This Cold Frozen Wasteland

rising from out of this cold frozen wasteland— 
a blanket white unfolds with pure hope and love
melting snowflakes on such a clear blue ocean
lying on the edge of a world that’s very scared 

while inside this mindset unfolds a radiant light 
sun shining buttercup of such special rare beauty 
in every little thing and precious detail which ever
so sweetly draws me to you my love, my darling

even the sound of your soft voice echoes on
inside with such mellifluous golden whispers 
sweetly enhancing the very music you sing 
to me which plays magic tricks so enchanting 

and hypnotizing my very soul while stealing 
my heart away and bringing me under your
spell and the softness of your wonder and love
both so overwhelming and intoxicating so fully

with this our mutual joy and love so deep and
so rare makes our time together seem so endless 
my love for you are so special and so right that I 
must pinch myself at times to see if all this is real

and so, rising from out of this cold frozen wasteland—
our mutual spirits, souls, and emotions are now ONE
my very special enchantress since fate and love have 
put us ONE on the edge of a world that’s very scared

Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid – A Collaborated Poem,
December 20, 2014 (Free Verse)

allegorybeautyemotionsfeelingslovefree verse

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Anne-Lise Andresen

December 23, 2014 at 3:46 AM

- Liam (and Gary), really amazing .... everyone deserves love .... It is primarily through love we understand what life is all about .... Give love and you get much more back :) - I wishing you and your family a beautiful Christmas .... enjoy in peace, my dear friend Liam - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

December 24, 2014 at 2:35 PM

we sure all do anne lise love is power of our creation wonderful comment dear pal wishing you and your family a very happy christmas

Brenda Meier-Hans

December 22, 2014 at 6:02 PM

That really is something sacred and so very beautiful. Wonderful write Liam and Gary.

Liam Mcdaid

December 23, 2014 at 5:21 PM

thank you kindly brenda wonderful comment dear friend wishing you and your family a merry christmas

Dorian Petersen Potter

December 22, 2014 at 12:08 PM

Awesome! Very beautiful golden glowing pens Gary and Liam!This is just a wonderful love story of a very strong couple in love making it thru all.I love the happy ending of them as One. Enjoyed it very much my very dear friends.You two guys never stopped surprising me with your beautiful writing talents and collaborations. A solid 7 +++ from me to each of you! Wish you both again a very Merry Christmas and your families. Have a very lovely Monday dearest Liam! (: Love and Hugs! xoxxoxx D.

Liam Mcdaid

December 23, 2014 at 11:35 AM

thank you kindly dorian dear friend truly wonderful comment a merry chrismas to you and your family also