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Author's Notes:  This poem, "rising from out of this cold frozen wasteland," is a new co-authored write by Liam McDaid and me.  We both thought that you might be interested in the particular metaphor we developed in this poem portraying a love that's discovered between a man and a women whose spirits, souls, and emotions unite as ONE putting them on the edge of a world that's very scared!!  (Gary Bateman, December 20, 2014) (Free Verse poetic format) 

Categories:  allegory, beauty, emotions, feelings, love, metaphor, and together. 

rising from out of this cold frozen wasteland— a blanket white unfolds with pure hope and love melting snowflakes on such a clear blue ocean lying on the edge of a world that’s very scared while inside this mindset unfolds a radiant light sun shining buttercup of such special rare beauty in every little thing and precious detail which ever so sweetly draws me to you my love, my darling even the sound of your soft voice echoes on inside with such mellifluous golden whispers sweetly enhancing the very music you sing to me which plays magic tricks so enchanting and hypnotizing my very soul while stealing my heart away and bringing me under your spell and the softness of your wonder and love both so overwhelming and intoxicating so fully with this our mutual joy and love so deep and so rare makes our time together seem so endless my love for you are so special and so right that I must pinch myself at times to see if all this is real and so, rising from out of this cold frozen wasteland— our mutual spirits, souls, and emotions are now ONE my very special enchantress since fate and love have put us ONE on the edge of a world that’s very scared Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid – A Collaborated Poem, December 20, 2014 (Free Verse)

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Date: 12/23/2014 3:46:00 AM
- Liam (and Gary), really amazing .... everyone deserves love .... It is primarily through love we understand what life is all about .... Give love and you get much more back :) - I wishing you and your family a beautiful Christmas .... enjoy in peace, my dear friend Liam - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/24/2014 2:35:00 PM
we sure all do anne lise love is power of our creation wonderful comment dear pal wishing you and your family a very happy christmas
Date: 12/22/2014 6:02:00 PM
That really is something sacred and so very beautiful. Wonderful write Liam and Gary.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/23/2014 5:21:00 PM
thank you kindly brenda wonderful comment dear friend wishing you and your family a merry christmas
Date: 12/22/2014 12:08:00 PM
Awesome! Very beautiful golden glowing pens Gary and Liam!This is just a wonderful love story of a very strong couple in love making it thru all.I love the happy ending of them as One. Enjoyed it very much my very dear friends.You two guys never stopped surprising me with your beautiful writing talents and collaborations. A solid 7 +++ from me to each of you! Wish you both again a very Merry Christmas and your families. Have a very lovely Monday dearest Liam! (: Love and Hugs! xoxxoxx D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/23/2014 11:35:00 AM
thank you kindly dorian dear friend truly wonderful comment a merry chrismas to you and your family also
Date: 12/22/2014 12:05:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful...Tender, sweet, and full of hope and joy. I enjoyed this, you two.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/23/2014 8:03:00 AM
thank you eileen there is always a universal joy in loving wonderful comment wishing you and your family a merry christmas dear friend
Date: 12/22/2014 11:43:00 AM
such a beatiful poem
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/23/2014 7:56:00 AM
thank you kindly victoria beautiful comment dear friend deeply appreciated

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