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Rising From Darkness

Sunlight's shining beams
A stairway to the Heavens
Lighting the shadows




Copyright © 2009 Lena “Lolita” Townsend


*for Raul’s “Ascension” contest

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Colleen Bono

November 29, 2009 at 11:38 AM

I like it.Check out my poem Today is the Day.It's a spirit lifter.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

November 27, 2009 at 11:43 AM

Congratulations Lena, on your success Raul Moreno’s “Ascension” contest with this lovely haiku. Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Brandee Augustus

November 26, 2009 at 11:19 AM

Congratulations on getting a win in Raul's contest! I really love how you ended your haiku.

James Fraser

November 25, 2009 at 10:18 AM

Excellent Haiku Lena, big congrats on your winning piece in Raul's contest >> James

November 24, 2009 at 2:58 PM

I really liked this poem the first time I read it. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. Way to go! Enjoy your honor. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving. Karen

Sharon Winter

November 24, 2009 at 2:18 PM

Such a beautiful haiku! Thanks so much sweet friend for your kind congrats on my feature. Warm hugs, shar xoxo

Elaine George

November 24, 2009 at 3:55 AM

Beautiful Haiku, Lena. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest, and thank you for your kind comments. Much Love, Lainie

Brian Strand

November 24, 2009 at 3:40 AM

Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Lena.Rgds Brian

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 24, 2009 at 3:34 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Ascension contest Lena. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 23, 2009 at 9:45 PM

Congrats, Lolita, on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. well deserved honor.. blessings ... luv .. happy turkey day.. Linda-Marie ,P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Raul Moreno

November 23, 2009 at 9:36 PM

Lolita, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul

November 21, 2009 at 1:51 PM

Nice use of alliteration and imagery for a creative view. What an uplifting poem! Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing. Karen

Elaine George

November 20, 2009 at 12:41 PM

Dear Lena. A beautiful Hailu. Best wishes in Raul's contest. Love, Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 19, 2009 at 6:40 AM

Thank you for starting my new day out with some excellent reading Lena. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. I wish you the best in Raul's contest. Love, Carol

Marty Owens

November 18, 2009 at 10:01 PM

Another beautiful Haiku...Love it... good luck in the contest....Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 18, 2009 at 9:39 AM

Lovely, lilting, lyrical words Lolita and good luck to u also in Raul's contest... great title too... his photo was great ... luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

P Sheart

November 18, 2009 at 7:33 AM

Lena, Awesome Haiku! A lovely vision. I've read some good entry's to Raul's contest, it'll be a hard contest to judge I think. Good luck hun! Smile. Thanks for sharing and for your comments friend. Love Light Patty

Brian Strand

November 18, 2009 at 7:11 AM

Thank you for your welcome blog comments Lena.Rgds Brian

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