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Image result for pictures of a murder of crows on the ground with a warning crow in a treeA murder of crows on the ground in your yard can mean that you are going to face change and growth. This is some beliefs and folklore.

Rising- CM

Red sun rising against cobalt blue, spread Dread that could be running rampant, its truly said Crows' appearance as such, everyone knows Throws questions that need answers, I suppose Meaning is spiritual so it is intervening Leaning toward a stronger spiritual convening Call to think differently, no longer crawl Shawl on, stand tall, face life, lessons learned recall
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Wolf Avatar
August 25, 2026 at 7:42 PM
These lentos sure seem like a great opportunity to s-t-r-e-t-c-h the way words can be utilized. You certainly have taken the opportunity and run with it. Very nice!!
Kendrick Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 5:47 AM
Thank you, Gershon, I am delighted you found it stretched and nice. Your time spent here is appreciated. 👍⭐. Sara K.
George Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 10:18 PM
Dear Sara, do you have the same belief in your culture too.... ! Any crowding of crows or even ants is supposed to presage something different from the usual to happen. Your intuition and a call to rise into the spiritual realm are greatly appreciated.
Kendrick Avatar
August 25, 2026 at 4:43 AM
Valsa, I was not taught about omens or folklore very much growing up. My parents did not believe in those things, but I have learned some of these from reading and actually looking them up because I know that some cultures do teach such things. It has been interesting to learn how some cultures look at nature to understand life. Thank you for the visit and nice review. 👍⭐. Sara K.
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August 23, 2026 at 4:57 AM
Ohhh, this is quite meaningful and informative, I have never heard of such an interpretation about the dead crows.. but you've explained it so beautifully and given a profound perspective to ponder upon! Absolutely wonderful ~ and so brilliantly executed for the contest! The spiritual essence also here is very soul-stirring! Best wishes to you in the contest, I also wish to try this form lento, ah, never did before, but sounds interesting! Sending you moonlight and healing starbeams 💫💫 ⭐⭐💜💜
Kendrick Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 1:15 PM
Hiya, there have been crows in my front yard this August since my husband has been deceased now for 10 months. The crows have never been in my front yard before that I can remember, although they have been in the back close to the garden area. I looked it up and it said it could be an omen according to folklore that a spiritual change and challenge for me. Thank you for dropping by with such a kind and uplifting review.👍. Sara K.
Kerr Avatar
August 22, 2026 at 10:51 PM
A poem that deserves serious consideration, premiere awards, and praise.🔥⭐ Best of luck, Sara, with this. Howard🔥
Kendrick Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 4:50 AM
Why, thank you, Howard for your uplifting review of my work. I appreciate the visit and your time spent here. ⭐. Sara K.
Dietrich Avatar
August 21, 2026 at 11:43 PM
You did a great job with the challenge and rhymes. Good one for the contest. Oops. I didn't put CM. I gotta go do that
Kendrick Avatar
August 22, 2026 at 5:28 AM
Andrea, interesting challenge but not so easy to write. Thank you for dropping by. Sara K. 👍
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August 21, 2026 at 5:12 PM
well crafted Lento, Sara K. sending hugs your way, Sara B
Kendrick Avatar
August 22, 2026 at 5:29 AM
I appreciate the kind review, Sara B. Always need the warmth of a hug. Sara K. 👍
Rolland Avatar
August 21, 2026 at 3:44 PM
great poem, will remember meaning is spiritual quite inspiring bon dimanche
Kendrick Avatar
August 21, 2026 at 4:35 PM
Yann, I hope your upcoming Sunday will be a good one as well. Thank you for stopping by. 👍. Sara K.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 21, 2026 at 12:54 PM
What a wonderful write for this picture. I have also heard this said but do Not know if it is true. "Good Luck" if for a contest...  Have a lovely day writing away...........
Kendrick Avatar
August 21, 2026 at 4:33 PM
Paula, thank you for your thoughtful review of my work and the wishes for the contest. I had to go to the doctor today. Not sick but I have to go several times a year for them to okay me getting refills on my meds. 👍on your comments. Sara K.
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