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Rises With Sun

Rises with sun, the morning with shine, Clear is the view, for churches, mosque and shrine. Glory of its softness, sweet as bread and wine, A beautiful moment for remembering the holy divine. Now darkness of loneliness vanished with the night, Open up your mind; towards the sky appearing so bright. Brings the almighty to you, the message of miracle and hope, Using symbol of morning; denotes your grieve will elope. A new day, a new journey, a new way, for every bird, animal and their venue, Why are you so frightened? Go, plant your own avenue. World was created for survivors, who never willed to give-up, For those brave souls; who learn, implement and live up. Upright is your future like trees and mountains high; Giving the message to shade the noon, for underneath who’s the feeble lie. You are the spark which ignites the thunder, Why are you so afraid, even we god make blunder. Rises with sun, the morning with shine, Bring Glory to me, as you are my art so fine… -‘Panchi’ Panchal Hitesh see more on: www.reckonhp.blogspot.in

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Date: 1/7/2014 1:05:00 PM
Hello Hitesh, an open mind can travel so far. I like how you have a sweet & deep taste. EXCELLENT.... LOVE ~SKAT~
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Hitesh Panchal
Date: 1/8/2014 11:41:00 AM
Thanks Skat
Date: 1/7/2014 1:06:00 AM
Hitesh, you lift the heavy feeling, what a beautiful poem... Much deepness in your poem... You did well with the enclosed rhyme... I'm not much of a rhyming poet... If ever I was to write with rhymes, I'd want it to flow like this... xox~ Linda
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Hitesh Panchal
Date: 1/7/2014 3:04:00 AM
i really appreciate your modesty, I read your work too and it is truly amazing..... trust me m also way inspired from you

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