Risen

Oh! What a weary world of woe
To see a pious man, laid low
A pitiless look, from Godless eyes
Barabbas luck, means His demise

His destiny, to be betrayed
That Judas kiss, a liar made
A King of Kings, in paupers clothes
A Crown of Thorns, His sweet repose

For He’s no friend of mine, he cried
Three times condemned, three times denied
Wash clean the sins, from guiltless hands
A barbaric end, the mob demands

Your truth lies closer to the bone
Your fate is theirs and theirs, alone
They claim you, as their King of Jews
Is this the epitaph, you choose

Her dream, her life, her wondrous joy
Her son, her blood, her little boy
Her pleas for mercy, peal in vain
As blood falls from his face, as rain

Not wanting, of His pains to blur
He drinks not of the Wine and Myrrh
To lay His life down, for mankind
The Heavens weep its Angels blind

A final thrust, centurions spear
The Miracle of Christ is clear
Released from Earthly bonds, His prison
The third day down, the Lord is Risen…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 4/26/2016 7:07:00 AM
Hi Peter, with the handsome avatar (with all respects) First I'm going to say WOW! I enjoyed the flow, the hint of alliteration and my favorite line --Judas Kiss, a Liar made-- You poured your words well, the Ascension of Jesus Christ was a Holy Miracle. A 7 --SKAT
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Date: 4/30/2016 6:06:00 AM
Ha! Ha! SKAT, an old photo. I used that one for a book I published A collection of songs and poems I wrote, in 2010, called 'Genesis & Other Short Stories', my attempt at humour is in the title...lol Poor Teddy fell off his throne and is no longer with us...Keep up the writing and keep the faith sister you write great stuff!
Date: 3/29/2016 1:15:00 PM
- Where's the teddy bear? :) - A beautiful religious poems, Peter - Hope yours Easter was fine - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/30/2016 6:46:00 AM
Thanks Anne Lise.....teddy fell down the bowl lolz Hope all's well!
Date: 3/19/2016 10:59:00 PM
Beautifully written in very profound lines, the Sacrifice of Christ on the Cross to mark "tetelestai" (fully paid) for all the sins of repentant sinners. Amen to this and a 7.
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Date: 3/19/2016 4:24:00 PM
Peter..A lovely Easter poem.. A7 most definitely..blessings in abundance
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