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Rise, the Silvered Moon

sunlight dims at dusk blaze diminished and fading as she slips to sea rise, the silvered moon with a scepter in his hand to rule starlit night celestial rapport harmony and unison as allied partners

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/23/2021 5:26:00 PM

lovely, Jenna ~

Mark Koplin

Date: 3/9/2021 5:20:00 AM

Beautiful, I love the message! Great job Jenna!

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/9/2021 6:43:00 AM

Sincerely, Mark. Thank you.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/8/2021 1:00:00 AM

Perfect imagery of our two celestial bodies Jenna. Have a great week. Tom

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/8/2021 8:10:00 AM

Thanks Tom. Monday morning is fine so far.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 3/7/2021 2:25:00 PM

Hi lady.. I love these. So lovely. God bless you with love, Gina

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/7/2021 3:00:00 PM

Hi Gina, and thanks so much for always visiting my poetry.

David Kavanagh

Date: 3/7/2021 1:27:00 PM

Heya Jenna, sun and moon partnership runs deeper than we know, I’m totally convinced they have as yet, undiscovered connections; fantastic haikus, cheers David

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/7/2021 2:59:00 PM

Hi David, and I have a feeling you're correct. Thanks for the nice comments.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/7/2021 12:19:00 PM

I like the poem and cool picture to accompany it. A great pairing.

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/7/2021 2:59:00 PM

Thanks for liking both offerings, Rick.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/7/2021 11:20:00 AM

I love poems about the sun and moon, delightful imagery Jenna:-) hugs Jan xx

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/7/2021 11:43:00 AM

Thank you lots, Jan. I picture them as star crossed lovers who can never meet, except in passing.

Joanna Feltham

Date: 3/7/2021 10:22:00 AM

I enjoyed your Haiku. They say humans are so affected by the moon as we are made up of mostly water. Have a lovely day.

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/7/2021 10:28:00 AM

Thanks so much, Joanna. I can see the connection between the two. Interesting.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/7/2021 9:54:00 AM

The pull of the moon is always fascinating.

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/7/2021 9:59:00 AM

It truly is, Victor. I've always imagined the moon as female in gender, but most pictures I found showed that to be in opposition to that...so a slight alteration but the gist is the same. Thanks for stopping by this Sunday. Hugs.