Jenna Logan Poet Haiku

Rise, the Silvered Moon

sunlight dims at dusk
blaze diminished and fading
as she slips to sea

rise, the silvered moon
with a scepter in his hand
to rule starlit night

celestial rapport
harmony and unison
as allied partners

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Line Gauthier March 23, 2021 at 5:26 PM lovely, Jenna ~

Mark Koplin March 9, 2021 at 5:20 AM Beautiful, I love the message! Great job Jenna! Jenna Logan March 9, 2021 at 6:43 AM Sincerely, Mark. Thank you.

Tom Cunningham March 8, 2021 at 1:00 AM Perfect imagery of our two celestial bodies Jenna. Have a great week. Tom Jenna Logan March 8, 2021 at 8:10 AM Thanks Tom. Monday morning is fine so far.

Regina Mcintosh March 7, 2021 at 2:25 PM Hi lady.. I love these. So lovely. God bless you with love, Gina Jenna Logan March 7, 2021 at 3:00 PM Hi Gina, and thanks so much for always visiting my poetry.

David Kavanagh March 7, 2021 at 1:27 PM Heya Jenna, sun and moon partnership runs deeper than we know, I’m totally convinced they have as yet, undiscovered connections; fantastic haikus, cheers David Jenna Logan March 7, 2021 at 2:59 PM Hi David, and I have a feeling you're correct. Thanks for the nice comments.

Richard Lamoureux March 7, 2021 at 12:19 PM I like the poem and cool picture to accompany it. A great pairing. Jenna Logan March 7, 2021 at 2:59 PM Thanks for liking both offerings, Rick.

Jan Allison March 7, 2021 at 11:20 AM I love poems about the sun and moon, delightful imagery Jenna:-) hugs Jan xx Jenna Logan March 7, 2021 at 11:43 AM Thank you lots, Jan. I picture them as star crossed lovers who can never meet, except in passing.

Jo Chamberlain March 7, 2021 at 10:22 AM I enjoyed your Haiku. They say humans are so affected by the moon as we are made up of mostly water. Have a lovely day. Jenna Logan March 7, 2021 at 10:28 AM Thanks so much, Joanna. I can see the connection between the two. Interesting.

Victor Buhagiar March 7, 2021 at 9:54 AM The pull of the moon is always fascinating. Jenna Logan March 7, 2021 at 9:59 AM It truly is, Victor. I've always imagined the moon as female in gender, but most pictures I found showed that to be in opposition to that...so a slight alteration but the gist is the same. Thanks for stopping by this Sunday. Hugs.