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Rise, the Silvered Moon

sunlight dims at dusk
blaze diminished and fading
as she slips to sea

rise, the silvered moon
with a scepter in his hand
to rule starlit night

celestial rapport
harmony and unison
as allied partners

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Line Gauthier Date: 3/23/2021 5:26:00 PM lovely, Jenna ~ Login to Reply

Mark Koplin Date: 3/9/2021 5:20:00 AM Beautiful, I love the message! Great job Jenna! Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 3/9/2021 6:43:00 AM Sincerely, Mark. Thank you.

Tom Cunningham Date: 3/8/2021 1:00:00 AM Perfect imagery of our two celestial bodies Jenna. Have a great week. Tom Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 3/8/2021 8:10:00 AM Thanks Tom. Monday morning is fine so far.

Regina Mcintosh Date: 3/7/2021 2:25:00 PM Hi lady.. I love these. So lovely. God bless you with love, Gina Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 3/7/2021 3:00:00 PM Hi Gina, and thanks so much for always visiting my poetry.

David Kavanagh Date: 3/7/2021 1:27:00 PM Heya Jenna, sun and moon partnership runs deeper than we know, I’m totally convinced they have as yet, undiscovered connections; fantastic haikus, cheers David Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 3/7/2021 2:59:00 PM Hi David, and I have a feeling you're correct. Thanks for the nice comments.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/7/2021 12:19:00 PM I like the poem and cool picture to accompany it. A great pairing. Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 3/7/2021 2:59:00 PM Thanks for liking both offerings, Rick.

Jan Allison Date: 3/7/2021 11:20:00 AM I love poems about the sun and moon, delightful imagery Jenna:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 3/7/2021 11:43:00 AM Thank you lots, Jan. I picture them as star crossed lovers who can never meet, except in passing.

Jo Chamberlain Date: 3/7/2021 10:22:00 AM I enjoyed your Haiku. They say humans are so affected by the moon as we are made up of mostly water. Have a lovely day. Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 3/7/2021 10:28:00 AM Thanks so much, Joanna. I can see the connection between the two. Interesting.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 3/7/2021 9:54:00 AM The pull of the moon is always fascinating. Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 3/7/2021 9:59:00 AM It truly is, Victor. I've always imagined the moon as female in gender, but most pictures I found showed that to be in opposition to that...so a slight alteration but the gist is the same. Thanks for stopping by this Sunday. Hugs.