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Rise of the Dawn

Rise of the dawn Dark clouds of gloom burst, Thunder and lightening flash, Morning sunshine beams ! Haiku- 5/7/5 Written June 30th, 2015 For contest " Traditional haiku" by Shadow Hamilton

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Kp Nunez

Date: 7/1/2015 7:47:00 PM

Oh this would have done well, Dr. Upma. I think Shadow has another contest going. Love the imagery.

Milton Robertson

Date: 7/1/2015 8:30:00 AM

I can relate, Dark clouds of gloom burst. My life is in Kaos, going through the worst. Thunder and lighting flash. Will I make through this, will I last. Morning sunshine beams. GOD'S Light, Everything's alright. Excellent.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/1/2015 4:50:00 AM

this is very lovely Dr Upma but haiku are not done in capital letters only lower case and no punctuation is used hugs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/1/2015 4:55:00 AM

Oh thanks Shadow! Didn't notice that !

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/1/2015 2:37:00 AM

What a beauty Dr. Sharma! This one should be a top winner! Cheers, Connie 7

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/1/2015 1:50:00 AM

ooo I love dawn, I love water, what more can I say. Dawn, takes the grease out of the way. LOL, I'm playing with you. I know exactly what kind of dawn you talking of. Love LINDA

Skat A

Date: 7/1/2015 12:28:00 AM

Dr Upma. enjoyed your poem **SKAT**

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/30/2015 2:44:00 PM

all in a rainy day!!! I enjoyed the read.