Rise of David

Giant Goliath never triumphed over young David That’s instilled in each Bible story reader’s heart, verily avid Arrogance always meets failure along strong faith’s fight When trust in God prevails as did David with all his might. Persistent to vanquish rude behavior David, with poise, faced the haughty warrior Then through his empowered sling Came the killer stone’s great zing Proving God’s power as most superior. Thus was shepherd David’s rise to phenomenal fame Acclaimed Israel’s king* who exalted the Lord’s name… Yet midst his downfall caused by human nature’s weakness He still cleaved to God’s love for triumphant blissfulness.
*Acts 13:22 …He (God) raised up unto them David to be their king; to whom also he gave testimony, and said, I have found David the son of Jesse, a man after mine own heart, which shall fulfil all my will. September 18, 2019 Honorable Mention, "Clerimerick Couplets (Hybrid Form)" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Mark Toney; judged on 9/28/2019.

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Date: 9/28/2019 6:52:00 PM
a very nice tribute to King David! Congrats on the HM, Beata.
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Date: 9/28/2019 6:35:00 PM
Beata, this is a lovely narrative on the strengths and weaknesses of David, and his continued reliance on God. Congratulations on your Honorable Mention! ~Mark
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Date: 9/19/2019 12:29:00 PM
Beauty a true testament of the events... This must be a #1 placed pick... should also be a POTD... Excitingly wonderful a grand verse. Thank you for all you do James
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Date: 9/18/2019 11:15:00 PM
I absolutely LOVE this. I hope it wins - as it should. I adore your poetry and the use of scripture. I praise God for leading me to read your work. Many prayers
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