"rise and Shine"

The morning sun rises like a beam of light
stealing our shadows....
Windswept emotions cover our bodies that
reflect from our windows....
We climb into each other like loose change 
in my pocket....
Our mind and souls are one as our lips find 
there way under this daybreak scene....
To freeze this moment would be like stopping
the world from its lean....
We enjoy the coffee and a Danish's as the crumbs
find there way down our cheeks...
Our dreams are fed as the shower cools us as we
plan for other peaks....
Now we start our day with a grin because we know
rain or shine how it began....

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Strand Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 11:48 PM
Very evocative & memorable opening couplet Michael>rgds Brian
Conway Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 1:45 PM
Wow beautiful poem! Going to my favorites!~Tirzah~
Sweetheart Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 1:27 PM
Well how about "bad" ..then "good"..haha.. thankxxx White Knight.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
Sweetheart Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 6:38 AM
Secrets between lovers who are one..so beautiful Michael..that special glow is felt in your lines when two connect into one LUV and its magical.. enjoyed this refreshing poetry so early on a Saturday as I pack to leave Sunday.. will miss my White Knight .. hope all miss the "Sweetheart" too..with luv..
A   Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 5:36 AM
Nice to read so brignt and early. Fits with todays movement, love the emotions on your poem, hvae a nice one,..p.d.
Galua Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 5:30 AM
My gosh....this is so good....I tried to make sunshine poems but not good as this...beautifully catch and lines full of pure poetry....I love it so much...really...^_^v
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