Premiere Contest WinnerRise Above It

We who have made a lot of struggle in this lovely garden And have seen how a river can flow on like a jingling girl Overlooking the muck and mud accompanying the stream That tries to arrest the dream, full of beautiful movement Know very well how to rise above the holy terror We who have walked a long path amidst the colorful strife And have seen in life the sparkle of sun in its ups and downs Avoiding the black sheep and others of the ilk horsing around With a view to mar the music to ensure the sun is suppressed Know very well how to ride the waves despite the irritants. We who have seen a great deal in our life of fair and foul And have seen the blue sky dance on the breeze in drizzle Ignoring the carbon and sulfur busy at polluting the air That seeks to rob the rhythm of its purple romance Know very well how to keep away from the bad apples We who have seen how the raindrops make love in the boughs Can of course rise above those who prefer living out of line
________________________________________________________ June 13, 2016 For Rise Above It – Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Becca Teagan
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Breedt Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 6:18 AM
Hi Probir , congratulations on a very crafty poem. Intelligent and thought provoking
Gupta Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 7:10 AM
Thank you ...
Misra Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 10:40 AM
Excellent write, Probir. You have really taken the theme to a fantastic height - yes, despite everything we will overcome. There is so much hope and positivity in your poem. Congratulations on your top spot. ~karam~
Gupta Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 11:06 PM
Thank you ...
Rycroft Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 4:31 AM
Congrats on you win x
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June 20, 2016 at 6:41 AM
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Devnath  Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 1:25 PM
Excellent poem my lovely friend and wish you a great congratulation on your win. Loved always, bl
Gupta Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 7:55 PM
Thank you ...
U.D Palawon  Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 12:12 PM
Great words to rise above it! Congrats. Sunita :)
Gupta Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 12:25 PM
Thank you ....
Chansarkar Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 10:36 AM
lovely poem,congratulations Probir!
Gupta Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 12:26 PM
Thank you ...
Mgk Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 10:28 AM
Congratulations on your win. And it is a great and beautiful poem... :)
Gupta Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 12:27 PM
Thank you ...
Pennell  Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 8:37 AM
congrats on your win my friend great poem stephen
Gupta Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 9:44 AM
Thank you Stephen ...
Ficklin Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 8:09 AM
I really liked your approach here Probir :) you are so right only those who "have seen how the raindrops make love" can rise above. Everyone else just sees rain...
Gupta Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 9:43 AM
Thank you for reading between the lines ...
Neumann Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 2:23 AM
Congratulations on your win. I very much like your message and your metaphors. Kai
Gupta Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 3:08 AM
Thank you Kai ...
Roper Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 11:47 PM
Probir, such a beautiful poem congratulations on your 1st place win!!! Hugs
Gupta Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 3:09 AM
Thank you Eve. I know you are glad. Thank you... Love
Richards Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 8:01 PM
Terrific and well deserved win !!!
Gupta Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 8:09 PM
Thank you so much ...
Gupta Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 8:04 PM
Thank you ... much material path I don't feel is still left to go ... ethereal path is not distant .... but then that is another poetry of inaccessible fog ... let that, by good wishes of all of you, get put off as much as possible. Be that as it may, now is jubilation for this number one .... thanks again....
Dietrich Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 7:26 PM
WAy to go, Probir, a very big congrats to you. Some wonderful lines in this one.
Gupta Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 8:08 PM
My reply to you Andrea has got posted in Carrie's space ... ha ha ha ... excuse me please ....
Medders Tobechi Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 7:14 PM
Congratulations on your win. These are well thought words,,,,
Gupta Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 8:09 PM
Thank you Janis ...
Teagan Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 5:48 PM
Congratulations on your first place win in my contest! I really enjoyed your poem. Please see my blog, for my thoughts about your poem...
Gupta Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 8:14 PM
Thank you so much for providing me the space to think and bring out ... and thank you so much for the placement ...
Raina Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 5:15 PM
Well done Probir.....there is a lot to learn from your words of wisdom.... congratulations on your first placement..
Gupta Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 8:16 PM
Thank you Meenakshi ...
Haight Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 3:59 PM
Wonderful wisdom in your lovely poem, Probir. Congratulations on your well-deserved Trophy First Place win in this 'rise above it' contest! 7 Sandra
Gupta Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 8:22 PM
Thank you ...
Rycroft Avatar
June 14, 2016 at 9:13 AM
Very good poem I really enjoyed it x
Gupta Avatar
June 14, 2016 at 10:26 AM
Thank you ...
Onclaud Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 12:27 PM
what a brave spirit you have, probir!... beautiful!..huggs
Gupta Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 12:36 PM
Thank you nette....
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