Rise Above It Premiere Contest Winner

We who have made a lot of struggle in this lovely garden And have seen how a river can flow on like a jingling girl Overlooking the muck and mud accompanying the stream That tries to arrest the dream, full of beautiful movement Know very well how to rise above the holy terror We who have walked a long path amidst the colorful strife And have seen in life the sparkle of sun in its ups and downs Avoiding the black sheep and others of the ilk horsing around With a view to mar the music to ensure the sun is suppressed Know very well how to ride the waves despite the irritants. We who have seen a great deal in our life of fair and foul And have seen the blue sky dance on the breeze in drizzle Ignoring the carbon and sulfur busy at polluting the air That seeks to rob the rhythm of its purple romance Know very well how to keep away from the bad apples We who have seen how the raindrops make love in the boughs Can of course rise above those who prefer living out of line
________________________________________________________ June 13, 2016 For Rise Above It – Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Becca Teagan

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Date: 9/10/2016 6:18:00 AM
Hi Probir , congratulations on a very crafty poem. Intelligent and thought provoking
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/10/2016 7:10:00 AM
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Date: 6/20/2016 10:40:00 AM
Excellent write, Probir. You have really taken the theme to a fantastic height - yes, despite everything we will overcome. There is so much hope and positivity in your poem. Congratulations on your top spot. ~karam~
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Date: 6/20/2016 11:06:00 PM
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Date: 6/20/2016 4:31:00 AM
Congrats on you win x
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/20/2016 6:41:00 AM
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Date: 6/18/2016 1:25:00 PM
Excellent poem my lovely friend and wish you a great congratulation on your win. Loved always, bl
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Date: 6/18/2016 7:55:00 PM
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Date: 6/18/2016 12:12:00 PM
Great words to rise above it! Congrats. Sunita :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/18/2016 12:25:00 PM
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Date: 6/18/2016 10:36:00 AM
lovely poem,congratulations Probir!
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Date: 6/18/2016 12:26:00 PM
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Date: 6/18/2016 10:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. And it is a great and beautiful poem... :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/18/2016 12:27:00 PM
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Date: 6/18/2016 8:37:00 AM
congrats on your win my friend great poem stephen
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/18/2016 9:44:00 AM
Thank you Stephen ...
Date: 6/18/2016 8:09:00 AM
I really liked your approach here Probir :) you are so right only those who "have seen how the raindrops make love" can rise above. Everyone else just sees rain...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/18/2016 9:43:00 AM
Thank you for reading between the lines ...
Date: 6/18/2016 2:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I very much like your message and your metaphors. Kai
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/18/2016 3:08:00 AM
Thank you Kai ...
Date: 6/17/2016 11:47:00 PM
Probir, such a beautiful poem congratulations on your 1st place win!!! Hugs
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/18/2016 3:09:00 AM
Thank you Eve. I know you are glad. Thank you... Love
Date: 6/17/2016 8:01:00 PM
Terrific and well deserved win !!!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/17/2016 8:09:00 PM
Thank you so much ...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/17/2016 8:04:00 PM
Thank you ... much material path I don't feel is still left to go ... ethereal path is not distant .... but then that is another poetry of inaccessible fog ... let that, by good wishes of all of you, get put off as much as possible. Be that as it may, now is jubilation for this number one .... thanks again....
Date: 6/17/2016 7:26:00 PM
WAy to go, Probir, a very big congrats to you. Some wonderful lines in this one.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/17/2016 8:08:00 PM
My reply to you Andrea has got posted in Carrie's space ... ha ha ha ... excuse me please ....
Date: 6/17/2016 7:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. These are well thought words,,,,
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Date: 6/17/2016 8:09:00 PM
Thank you Janis ...
Date: 6/17/2016 5:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win in my contest! I really enjoyed your poem. Please see my blog, for my thoughts about your poem...
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Date: 6/17/2016 8:14:00 PM
Thank you so much for providing me the space to think and bring out ... and thank you so much for the placement ...
Date: 6/17/2016 5:15:00 PM
Well done Probir.....there is a lot to learn from your words of wisdom.... congratulations on your first placement..
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Date: 6/17/2016 8:16:00 PM
Thank you Meenakshi ...
Date: 6/17/2016 3:59:00 PM
Wonderful wisdom in your lovely poem, Probir. Congratulations on your well-deserved Trophy First Place win in this 'rise above it' contest! 7 Sandra
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/17/2016 8:22:00 PM
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Date: 6/14/2016 9:13:00 AM
Very good poem I really enjoyed it x
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Date: 6/14/2016 10:26:00 AM
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Date: 6/13/2016 12:27:00 PM
what a brave spirit you have, probir!... beautiful!..huggs
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/13/2016 12:36:00 PM
Thank you nette....
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