Rise

I stand admist the divide,
Between heaven and hell,
Time stood still ,
Emotions i could no longer feel..

Long have i struggled , to find true purpose,
To earn my place in this troubled world,
I walk the path of a great destiny foretold,
Only to be disappointed , finding fool's gold,

Feelings of sorrow burden my soul,
The agony of defeat takes its toll,
As i put up my hands in surrender , abandoning all goals..
I remember the voices of my loved ones,
and the courage they instilled , to face whatever comes

Life is often riddled with hardships , do not fear,
Our existence is a gift bestowed by the gods,
And a challenging one it is,
So persevere with all your might,
Rise up from defeat and never lose your fight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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September 26, 2013 at 10:23 PM
This has a very truthful and powerful message. Never give up no matter how hard life gets. Powerful and deep. nice job
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