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riptides sneaky undertows drags black sand back into waves ~ sea hawks sound alarms 4/3/23 Contest: A New Nature Themed Haiku Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Date: 4/4/2023 8:37:00 AM
Easy to visualize, Sam. Well done:)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/4/2023 10:03:00 AM
Hi Daniel! Many thanks coming your way! Thankful for your delightful feedback! Happy Easter to you!
Date: 4/3/2023 4:34:00 PM
The theme of warning flows so smoothly through. Elizabeth
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/3/2023 8:06:00 PM
Thank you so much Elizabeth! We have had a winter of storms and as they roll in there are warning signs. I so appreciate your feedback. All the best. Blessings.

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