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Rippling Silver Pond

Rippling silver pond silent flow of molten moon my tip-toeing heart closer to another moon drinking silver sip by sip.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/26/2012 1:04:00 AM
Or maybe this was the other one I was supposed to see the other night? Also very good one. I love your imagery and romantic style, my friend! Always!
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Date: 5/25/2012 2:14:00 PM
Lovely piece!..TLH
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Date: 5/23/2012 11:54:00 AM
got more, kashi?... waiting!..:) huggs
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Date: 5/23/2012 8:00:00 AM
Half this week has sped by and I have enjoyed reading many poems. Just have to love the diversity of the poets here even in the contests. I am so happy to have been able to read your poetry today Kash. Have a wonderful day and may you find inspiration to write more along the way. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/23/2012 7:18:00 AM
A wonderful play on words here. Huggs TLee
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Date: 5/22/2012 8:14:00 PM
Bedazzled by this write!...Tanktastic. Hey, wondered where u were! Great write, poet! Great write!
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Date: 5/22/2012 5:22:00 PM
Sweet and romantic tanka Kash with lovely imagery! My tip- toeing heart...I love that line!! Blessings and Love, Rhonda
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Date: 5/22/2012 3:39:00 PM
nice poem! i love the last line.
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Date: 5/22/2012 3:15:00 PM
Romantic poem Kash, love it. - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/22/2012 2:05:00 PM
nice tanka Kash..Joseph
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Date: 5/22/2012 12:49:00 PM
that's the way i like it, ahah ahah, kashi buddy... yes over at rick's alley!.. what a comeback! :) huggs
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Date: 5/22/2012 11:55:00 AM
Ohmmm........;)
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