Rippling Silver Pond

Rippling silver pond silent flow of molten moon my tip-toeing heart closer to another moon drinking silver sip by sip.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2012 at 1:04 AM
Or maybe this was the other one I was supposed to see the other night? Also very good one. I love your imagery and romantic style, my friend! Always!
Harrington Avatar
May 25, 2012 at 2:14 PM
Lovely piece!..TLH
Onclaud Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 11:54 AM
got more, kashi?... waiting!..:) huggs
Brown Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 8:00 AM
Half this week has sped by and I have enjoyed reading many poems. Just have to love the diversity of the poets here even in the contests. I am so happy to have been able to read your poetry today Kash. Have a wonderful day and may you find inspiration to write more along the way. Love, Carol
Allen Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 7:18 AM
A wonderful play on words here. Huggs TLee
Song Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 8:14 PM
Bedazzled by this write!...Tanktastic. Hey, wondered where u were! Great write, poet! Great write!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 5:22 PM
Sweet and romantic tanka Kash with lovely imagery! My tip- toeing heart...I love that line!! Blessings and Love, Rhonda
Bauer Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 3:39 PM
nice poem! i love the last line.
Andresen Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 3:15 PM
Romantic poem Kash, love it. - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
May Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 2:05 PM
nice tanka Kash..Joseph
Onclaud Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 12:49 PM
that's the way i like it, ahah ahah, kashi buddy... yes over at rick's alley!.. what a comeback! :) huggs
Poet Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 11:55 AM
Ohmmm........;)
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