Winged Warrior Poet Cinqku

Ripples of Love-Cinqku

Ripples,
of my love
thru stormy seas
will reach the shores of your,
heaven.



Cinqku follows a strict 17 syllable count
arranged in five successive lines
of 2-3-4-6-2 syllables.



Sept.11.2018
Son of a Senryu Poetry
Sponsored by: Brahn Bailey


Placed 4'th

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Mahtab Bangalee June 26, 2019 at 5:40 AM excellent expression

Darlene De Beaulieu October 17, 2018 at 1:38 PM Hello Winged Warrior, the water is healing soothing to the soul. Have a nice day my friend.

Lewis Raynes September 16, 2018 at 9:09 PM so well crafted WW, congratulations on ur placement.

Subimal Sinha-Roy September 13, 2018 at 11:56 PM Congratulations, WW on your win with a beautiful verse.

Brandy Nicole September 13, 2018 at 4:04 PM There is something magical about the waves, the tender touch of the sea. Even if the waters caress is sometimes playful. Congratulations Winged Warrior, on this win. :) Brandy

Line Gauthier September 13, 2018 at 3:52 PM Lovely, WW. Congrats on your win.

Tom Cunningham September 13, 2018 at 3:42 PM Back with congratulations WW. Tom

Andrea Dietrich September 13, 2018 at 3:16 PM Love this one . Congrats on the win.

Paul Marc September 12, 2018 at 10:58 PM I love it.

Sara Kendrick September 12, 2018 at 5:26 PM Wow! Good one. Reads like it is a good contender.. Way to go. Thanks for stopping by. Sara

Janice Canerdy September 12, 2018 at 12:58 PM Moving use of romantic metaphor, WW! Janice Canerdy

Bette Bavington September 12, 2018 at 9:03 AM A moonlit night. A lone soul walking the beach gives one the idea that they could be missing some one. It's a very express poem with romantic tendencies. Well done.

Susan Ashley September 11, 2018 at 8:58 PM Oh, the poignancy of your superb poem reaches me deeply, WW.. Your radiant talent ripples endlessly, my wicked sib.. Much love and warmest wishes to you, your twis sis :))

Connie Marcum Wong September 11, 2018 at 4:18 PM Our bodies are mostly water and the metaphor within this piece delights the romantic poet's soul in me. : )

Ralph Sergi September 11, 2018 at 2:51 PM Very interesting poem form, WW. Your love and water blend onto the shore.

Brandy Nicole September 11, 2018 at 1:44 PM So beautifully expressed. Your thoughts are dreamy and romantic. ~ Brandy

Heidi Sands September 11, 2018 at 10:52 AM Beautiful WW! :)

Tom Cunningham September 11, 2018 at 10:35 AM True love finds it's way through all barriers. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart September 11, 2018 at 10:10 AM Simply gorgeous :) xomo