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Ripples of Grief

exhaling breath of laughter, a smile pretends ~ ripples of grief still aches


2/18/2023


A Ripple To Me 2' Contest Info
Sponsor	JCB Brul

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Unseeking Seeker

February 20, 2023 at 8:44 PM

… which true friends can see, feel. Enjoyed your write, Eve. Deep and true. Warmest congratulations on your win

Andrea Dietrich

February 20, 2023 at 3:49 PM

so sadly true. More congrats for you, Eve.

JC Brul

February 20, 2023 at 7:58 AM

You captured the emotions so well in few words. Congratulations!

Joanna Daniel

February 20, 2023 at 4:19 AM

This is fully packed with emotions, Eve, lovely, though wistful, congratulations:)

Valsa George

February 20, 2023 at 3:59 AM

Congratulations Eve on your first place win.

Aysha Nuwas

February 19, 2023 at 9:55 PM

I have been reading these Monoku's lovely! Yours is lovely too!

Constance La France

February 19, 2023 at 5:28 PM

Eve, your monoku is so deep and beautifully sad, blessings, Constance PS, I just sent you a soupmail.

Sotto Poet

February 19, 2023 at 6:09 AM

Lovely Monoku, Eve. Internally we may be roiling with agony, yet we mask it with fabricated waves of cheerfulness. Win Big

Jennifer Proxenos

February 19, 2023 at 5:45 AM

Hi Eve, such profound words to describe one's grief - loss and grief will forever be felt when a loved one has passed. HUGS AND LOVE MY FRIEND, Jennifer.