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Ripples of Grief

exhaling breath of laughter, a smile pretends ~ ripples of grief still aches 2/18/2023 A Ripple To Me 2' Contest Info Sponsor JCB Brul

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Unseeking Seeker

Date: 2/20/2023 8:44:00 PM

… which true friends can see, feel. Enjoyed your write, Eve. Deep and true. Warmest congratulations on your win

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2023 3:49:00 PM

so sadly true. More congrats for you, Eve.

Jcb Brul

Date: 2/20/2023 7:58:00 AM

You captured the emotions so well in few words. Congratulations!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/20/2023 4:19:00 AM

This is fully packed with emotions, Eve, lovely, though wistful, congratulations:)

Valsa George

Date: 2/20/2023 3:59:00 AM

Congratulations Eve on your first place win.

Aysha Nuwas

Date: 2/19/2023 9:55:00 PM

I have been reading these Monoku's lovely! Yours is lovely too!

Constance La France

Date: 2/19/2023 5:28:00 PM

Eve, your monoku is so deep and beautifully sad, blessings, Constance PS, I just sent you a soupmail.

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/19/2023 6:09:00 AM

Lovely Monoku, Eve. Internally we may be roiling with agony, yet we mask it with fabricated waves of cheerfulness. Win Big

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/19/2023 5:45:00 AM

Hi Eve, such profound words to describe one's grief - loss and grief will forever be felt when a loved one has passed. HUGS AND LOVE MY FRIEND, Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/19/2023 5:15:00 AM

- Described with emotion ... lovely written, Eve - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/19/2023 1:08:00 AM

Great contrast. Our life seems too complicated at times.

Valsa George

Date: 2/18/2023 9:38:00 PM

There may be seething volcanoes of pain inside, but we hide our grief and pain with made up ripples of smile. Great monoku , dear Eve

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 2/18/2023 9:31:00 PM

No one knows what goes on beneath, a smile hides one’s personal grief. Excellent Monoku Eve… Belle