Ripples

Disturbing water,
Calming surface awakens;
Absorbed by shoreline. 

By: Nathan Bane Leccese
© All Rights Reserved 09/08/2009

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September 16, 2009 at 10:33 AM

Interesting perspective captured in just three lines. I really like the last line. Keep on writing. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

September 12, 2009 at 1:37 PM

Excellent use of imagery, Nate! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

September 10, 2009 at 2:21 AM

This Haiku is very expressive and descriptive in just a few lines. Very readable and enjoyable. Keep writing. Sara

Michael Jordan

September 9, 2009 at 7:05 PM

Nathan this is a very well written haiku - I wanted to thank you for placing me in your contest bro - God Bless, mj

Doris Culverhouse

September 9, 2009 at 6:45 PM

nicely done, i can see the waves ending on the shore.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

September 9, 2009 at 11:41 AM

Dear Nathan, This is a great Haiku,it flows so smoothly together You are well versed in Haikus. Thank-YOU for picking my Poem in the show place I am Honored that YOU enjoyed it so much Again Thank-YOU ALWAYS YOURS...HG

James Fraser

September 9, 2009 at 11:25 AM

Terrific Haiku Nathan, thank you so much for my placing in your wonderful contest>>James

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 9, 2009 at 9:12 AM

I can see it Nathan. Beautiful Haiku. Love, Carol

Sue Mason

September 9, 2009 at 8:52 AM

I can see the sand soaking it up ... smile ... beautifully done, Nathan. Thanks so much for including me in your winners list with Two Peas In A Pod ...

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

September 9, 2009 at 5:26 AM

Nathan, Thank you for sharing your words. This haiku took me mentally to the beach where waves are absorbed just as you have described. Keep writing. And thank you for your comments on my poetry as well. Have a super Day! Lovingly, Dane Ann