Len Gasun Poet Pleiades

Ripples

Rolling musical staffs
Round disks on the blue sea
Rose petals of water
Romantic harmony
Refrains of this heart’s song
Rushing between raindrops
Rings for you my sweethearts




April 17,2021   11.14pm



4th Place in Pleiades R Contest
Sponsor: Kim Merryman 
Judged: April 19,2021

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Susan Ashley April 21, 2021 at 7:09 PM Len, your lush and vibrant imagery captured my heart's imagination. A beautiful graceful fulfilment of your title. Congratulations for your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Len Gasun April 26, 2021 at 6:33 AM Thank you dear poetess, Susan.

Kim Merryman April 19, 2021 at 4:46 PM Len, your words have a lyrical sense about them. Nice job! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M Len Gasun April 26, 2021 at 6:33 AM Thank you dear poetess, Kim.

Michelle Faulkner April 17, 2021 at 3:04 PM This is so lovely, the rhymes and flow have a musical quality to them, this should be at the top of the winners list, in my opinion~ Len Gasun April 26, 2021 at 6:33 AM Thank you dear poetess, Michelle.