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Rolling musical staffs Round disks on the blue sea Rose petals of water Romantic harmony Refrains of this heart’s song Rushing between raindrops Rings for you my sweethearts April 17,2021 11.14pm 4th Place in Pleiades R Contest Sponsor: Kim Merryman Judged: April 19,2021

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Date: 4/21/2021 7:09:00 PM
Len, your lush and vibrant imagery captured my heart's imagination. A beautiful graceful fulfilment of your title. Congratulations for your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Len Gasun
Date: 4/26/2021 6:33:00 AM
Thank you dear poetess, Susan.
Date: 4/19/2021 4:46:00 PM
Len, your words have a lyrical sense about them. Nice job! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 4/26/2021 6:33:00 AM
Thank you dear poetess, Kim.
Date: 4/17/2021 3:04:00 PM
This is so lovely, the rhymes and flow have a musical quality to them, this should be at the top of the winners list, in my opinion~
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Len Gasun
Date: 4/26/2021 6:33:00 AM
Thank you dear poetess, Michelle.

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