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life is not something that happens to you every decision you make is a brick in the wall of your lifestyle the way you stand your outlook on life builds the tower that bears your strength your dreams and mantra becomes your effigy your monument to the world every action undertaken affects your surroundings a ripple effect on your universe AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Posted on July 7, 2020

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/17/2020 2:38:00 AM

"your dreams and mantra becomes your effigy your monument to the world" - Perfect. This would have been enough; the other was gravy and frosting.

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/17/2020 8:45:00 AM

LOL thank you so much, Caren ~

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/8/2020 11:27:00 PM

Love the images of the brick wall and the monuments, referencing building oneself strong... Very nice. Thanks, Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/8/2020 11:38:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Gershon ~

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 7/8/2020 10:53:00 PM

I agree every single thing we do goes out in a ripple and touches everyone it touches. Like the first poem of yours we read.

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/8/2020 11:37:00 PM

Thanks, much appreciated, Timothy ~

Jenish Somadas

Date: 7/8/2020 12:49:00 AM

a ripple effect on your universe.. So true Line.. life is not something that happens to you alone.. We are just a part of life..Beautiful thoughts..

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/8/2020 10:29:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Jenish ~