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Ripple Affection

from heart to hand to heart to hand shared with love where life began we are but a rock ready to toss no strings, no ties no secrets, no lies a ripple in time ready to live what is taken first also must give kindness breeds kindness and there is no love without hope but where do we get that when on a ship all alone the waves take us here and they move us over there lost has control amongst aimless old souls that's where the ripple and you coincide no ego, no pretense, no showing of pride one hand then another and the chain can go on for freedom from sorrow and guilt now depends there's no promise of tomorrow of goodness, of peace but if each person first walked in their poor neighbors feet gone pity with prudence amid a prejudiced eye human interaction with arms open wide It's not a call for a movement or offering too much of one's time a good word, a gesture with love from inside a ripple from you passed on to the next can continue forever leaving this world with affection, no less

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Date: 10/29/2019 6:30:00 AM
Your thoughts ripple with affection--lovely sentiments, TS.
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Ts Poetry
Date: 10/29/2019 7:20:00 AM
Thank you Vijay
Date: 10/29/2019 2:36:00 AM
With or without hope is there really love?;/ I don't know!;/
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Ts Poetry
Date: 10/29/2019 7:20:00 AM
Neither do I, thanks B
Date: 10/28/2019 9:55:00 PM
I love this sentiment ~ imagine no judgment, no comparisons, no pity; just understanding that we each have a story...And giving love, not because we expect it in return, but because we want to give it. Lovely, TS Poetry ~ really <3
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Ts Poetry
Date: 10/29/2019 7:16:00 AM
Truth, thank you
Date: 10/28/2019 8:47:00 PM
you know when I was a kid (not that long ago), usually after a half-assed attempt at skipping stones, although, I do remember one occasion where puppies were thrown into the shallow end of a damn to teach them how to swim (and they didn't sink, they did swim, cruel as it may sound) what kids get up to...I used to think ripples were the portal to another dimension. I think ripples in your poem, if people have the mindset to Love rather than Hate, could open other dimensions, far better than what we are living in now. Perhaps, the Ripple Effect...then again....
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Date: 10/30/2019 2:10:00 AM
the trick is, it's about 'giving' love with no expectations of a guaranteed return...there's the deal breaker for most.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 10/30/2019 2:07:00 AM
...I could write a book...
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Ts Poetry
Date: 10/28/2019 9:03:00 PM
I think we all have that perpensity to love, some a little more easily than others. A ray of hope offered to lighten another's day can transform not only one person but an entire world. You must have had a tremendous childhood
Date: 10/28/2019 8:36:00 PM
I've never thought of myself as a ripple in time. But I like it. After I pass... my ripple will fade away and others can have their time. Nicely done my friend. Have a great day.
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Date: 10/28/2019 8:59:00 PM
Thank you David. Our spirits will live on

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