Ripping Light Bare

Beneath the hum of porch light
You caress my fragrant skin,
While these eyes undress a gaze 
Deepening breaths to ignite.

As we move like moistened curves,
From a heated rendezvous
I become a flamed woman…
A rhythm of dusk immersed.

And a thousand moths quiver
Glowing on open window
Of porch light’s swelling cave…
Ripping my moth-flesh bare.

Upon the grass, lips create
One prayer wafting our names;
In love, you alone bring thrills
You are earth's song …my twin mate.



Craig Cornish's Chopped ll Contest
11/13/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lawless Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 6:21 PM
OOPS......how'd that "b" get in there, sorry nette, fast but not so accurate fingers.
Lawless Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 6:20 PM
WOW!!! Great write bette, poignant and powerful.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 2:34 PM
outstanding piece of writing nette very beautifully painted dear friend
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 9:49 PM
You have created a breathtaking image of beauty and passion, Nette! Congrats...hugs, Rhonda
Allison Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 12:00 PM
incredible imagery as ever Nette:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Kayode Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 8:58 AM
You are ever super,congrats on the win Nette.
Yvonne Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 8:45 PM
Another brilliant write from you Nette. Congratulations on your win. I loved reading this poem, thank you.
Richards Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 10:34 AM
One would never know that any required word was part of this challenge......it is so lovely, softly exquisite! Wow! Stunning!
Ellison Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 9:12 AM
Am I impressed? You can bet your sweet bippie I am! What a beaut! Loved it... loving hugs dear Nette! XXX
Goff Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 6:54 AM
Yes! Blown away, Nette! Jimbo
Parker Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 6:02 PM
OK my poetic friend you just went to another level,I don't think I have used this word before after reading someone's poetry, but "WOW", I'm a fan for life after this one...as for the contest..you win..fav list
Datu Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 12:27 PM
Jeepers this was good! Nette, you have a talent with imagery that makes it flow without effort and create beauty. Passionate poetry!
A. Sharma Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 10:51 AM
Wow Nette another amazing write from u! Love the flamed woman! Sure will place high! Best wishes!
Kendrick Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 10:22 AM
Reads like winning material way to go for the contest..Very passionate work..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
Trifiatis Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 8:27 AM
Oh how many times this performance we have seen without, even for a single second, saying it is enough? Hearts and souls in flames, enjoying the torture of love unending! Marvelous write dear Nette. Good luck!
Andresen Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 8:08 AM
- Lovely .... "you alone bring thrills" and enjoy with your poem - Luck in contest! - Have a happy weekend,Nette :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Chakrabarty Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 7:55 AM
Yes I can see this flamed woman moving like moistened curves in porch light under thousand quivering moths. She is the moth of love-silvery white. Much appreciated this one, nette Love XXXX rajat
Gonza Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 7:14 AM
Darn fine poem! Hard to pick one special line as this was woven with love's fascinating mood, Nette!
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